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Bound Consciousness

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Even though travel books paint modern cities with bright colors, surreal their destiny remains in an ever increasing challenge to survive. (Image by Pinterest)

Tuesday, November 29, 2016


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Bound Consciousness
by Odin Roark

Urban density
A dissonant crush of melodies,
Once heard from pushcarts and roof tops,
From sidewalks and crosswalks,
Stadiums and ball fields,
The tremolo of high Cs,
The basso profundo of low Gs,
Now a vacuous resonance,
Desperate gasps of id ignoring ego's ploy,
Sensory mirrors of fractured reflections,
Rapidly becoming shards of desperation,
Held tight to bosoms,
Long submerged in denial.

Such are the echoes of one's own company,
The hearing of one's own talk,
The seeing of one's narcissistic indulgence,
Yesterday's simple traffic jams of awareness,
Today's repetitive mash-ups,
Hubristic grumbling against the mind's cyclonic weather,
All while the lone voice of honesty,
The once integral essence of man,
Murmurs silent appeals,
Hoping its crumbling reality,
Its futile cries for help,
Go not forever unheard.

Puzzling is our modern awakening,
Seeing not the skyscrapers,
But cities decimated into surreal fields of rubble,
Where protecting oneself from oneself begs survival
From bound consciousness en masse.
 

 


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Reviewed on November 30, 2016
I like this piece for its pronunciation, very urban outside and trashy inside. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 30, 2016
Michio Kaku recently polled 100 scientists about what to expect in the future. He heralds cities as the savior of the planet, making very efficient use of urban space and transportation, while allowing the countryside to provide the necessary food and raw materials. Observations from cities like Tokyo show that birth rates drop dramatically with higher education and city life.

My observations of the city of Houston over the past 33 years has been that it is cleaner, safer and more pleasant with each passing year. There still are major problems to overcome the part of those are the result of immense immigration, not the city, itself.

Ron

Reviewed on November 30, 2016
While in Finland in 2008, I noticed how well they preserve their historical buildings as far back to Viking huts! Yes, some are so obsessed with building the tallest and fanciest buildings, forgetting the fine architecture of days gone by. Today's buildings are so cold looking...steel and glass. Oh, I could go on!! Great write!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 30, 2016
How do we free ourselves from "bound consciousness". An interesting concept worth exploring. John

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 30, 2016

thought provoking, compelling read


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