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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· A Place...

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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Dark Corners

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Like a boxing ring, the world offers few ways of escape from the exhausting bombardment of hateful, violent eyes. (Image by james wolf)

Thursday, February 2, 2017


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Dark Corners
by Odin Roark

He thought he knew angles.
After all,
he’d stumbled into the ropes,
been backed into the corners
for more than his share.

This was different.

He lay in bed,
fingering his glasses.
Should he wear them?
Leave them?
Did it matter?

His eyes dropped from the ceiling
to the backlit corner of his flapping window blind.
Green and red neon rolled its pattern outside,
nudging sticky air under the shade,
carrying the boredom of a lone pigeon
from the 10th floor ledge
to coo like a bell sinking under water.

He'd never had to consider this challenger before.
A mere corner of his hotel room
where only window and curtain
separated him from the final count.

He recalled the loud bells of the past,
the ones saving him many times.
But tonight...
tonight he was up against a real contender,
a massive force never faced before.
And there was nowhere to run.

This time

The bell was remaining silent.

He put on his glasses,
stood and stepped up to his final round.

He knew the mammoth shadow of his past,
the one his fists could never find,
would force him fot the mat someday.
It was inevitable.
Such a blow had been a long time coming.
Some of his life-trainer-experience called it
the forever-darkness-without-light.

He stepped out of the window
onto the ledge and was ready.

Until...

Until that beat up feathered warrior standing there
on its one leg,
stared at him with its only good eye
and cooed again.

It was another “again,”
like the bell underwater.

He hesitated,
adjusted his glasses,
gave one last glance at the injured pigeon and smiled.

"Tough love, ain’t it?"

He remained on the ledge
longer than he'd planned. 


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Reviewed on February 3, 2017
Though provoking and fantastic! This write is a "cliff hanger" for sure! Enjoyed!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 3, 2017
The story of one man's tormented final bout with the inevitable. Sidetracked by the resolute survival of the old pigeon, reminding him that still had fight in him after all the losses and saves by the bell. It was gripping and poignant. Leaving me ending up to the reader.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 3, 2017
Confronting a dark night of the soul. I've experienced it several times. Sometimes living is an act of courage; especially for some as they age and realize how opinionated they are and how alone they are in their views. For people like us, if nature, art, writing, and poetry isn't enough, what is enough? Again, Odin, you write something that would translate effectively to the screen. A riveting piece. Peace to you... r

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on February 3, 2017

poignant, thought provoking read

Never Stop Writing!
m

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 2, 2017
An amazing narrative. Love the ending. John


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