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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Preference Manifest

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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Exhaling the Ultimate

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With so many ways to picture finality, one is left with but a breath to rely on. (Image by Pinterest)

Saturday, May 13, 2017


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Exhaling the Ultimate
by Odin Roark

This cadence of a last breath,
this moment to determine
from where one’s final rhythm emanates.

Mirrored childhood,
adolescence,
or that much dreaded
final curtain of maturity?

Such parades the swell and gasp,
a Rite of Spring paradox
ingested forever the ethereal intravenous surge of finality.

Will it have a serpentine’s duplicity,
able to flow with a flowery resonance,
or the prickly shrill of cacti,
seeming to understand life’s chances
are but rabbits in the hat?

Will retention of the baby breath of suckling contentment
make silent intrusive memories of first-love betrayal and beyond?

Or…

Might the crackling rock of roll
make unexpected expansion of racing energy,
produce a heave,
a final extolling breath well spent?

Oh, how tenuous the allowance,
this last moment,
this ultimate attempt
to keep breathing the end’s ultimate message.



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Reviewed on May 15, 2017
Having "lost" "my Lady", whom I was Caregiver for eleven years, I had my head on her chest when her soul tore loose from her body. Then, I knew she was pain free again so I was happy.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 14, 2017
Much thought into the final gasp of life. I don't think that much about it like you do. All I would hope for is that it be calm and relaxed, and not something that is in desperation or great pain.

Ron


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