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Enigmatic Fly Casting

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

When gazing at the ceiling, we sometimes forget how valuable our often upside down nighttime perspective aids our everyday fantasies.

Monday, June 12, 2017


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Enigmatic Fly Casting

Once the boy made fly hooks
after school for ten cents a hook.
Big money then
for big dreams... then.

Now the boy a vintage man
has only nocturnal dreams
needing little money... now.

How prescient he thinks,
staring up at ceiling imaginings,
casting his line out into the dark,
like hooks needing to catch new dreams,
the ones swimming freely for the taking,
his heart the willing bait.

Night after night,
his inner feelings tethered,
hope floats beyond his past
until unknown stars
blink their infinite welcome.

His spirit takes heed,
the line reeled out to its end,
the hook’s purposeful drift
bringing a sigh to his throat.

Up there,
the stars, like other fishermen of providence,
pepper his longing with their inherent sparkle,
like the surface of a great lake reflecting its surroundings,
an invitation to join in their celestial campfire,
allow the embers and flames to ignite dreams never to wane,
even when often flickering of dim flame.

Is it the pumping heart that keeps operative
the lure that makes the pull-in so rewarding,
the catch and release so needed
in keeping alive the dreams?

It’s late…

His eyes flutter,
as the hook, now a dangling shadow in the abyss of rest
finds respite ‘til another night.

A perplexed moth and spider,
gaze down from the ceiling.
The man recedes into sleep,
a mystical cast off enveloping
his smiling eyelids. 


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Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on June 13, 2017
This is picking up the rod and keeping it real.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 12, 2017
I very much like the way you take the image of hook and line and make it into a kind of universal symbol that is meaningful and deep. Well done. A very interesting poem full of insight. John

Reviewed on June 12, 2017
Such a touching story here. May he ponder the days of making fly fishing hooks many more times!

Love ya!

Jane


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