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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Fading Snapshots

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Time freezes a frame here, another there, until… (Image by pinterest)

Saturday, October 14, 2017


Poem Artwork
Fading Snapshots

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Waxy paper
cartooned respite
chewy pink
bubbles small
messes big
don't you be blowin' them
your brows be shaved
daunted mother
silly child

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Driver's license
double feature drive-in
windows open
friends in next car
cuddle up seats
brown bagged cherries
stems to pull
pits to suck clean
stomach aches ignored
paper peeled straws
blowgun ammo
shot between cars
shoring up boredom
while girlfriend gazes
Jimmy Dean's red jacket
up there four stories tall

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Makin' it on my own
lonely brownstone
Central Park always dark
letters few
collectors many
pay or else
notice this
notice that
Oops
the draft is nice
they say
three squares a day
see the world
'til you don't

Dark storms
rain down shrapnel
brain entangled
sunrise runs
nature hides
evil's time

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Smiles
smiles
door to door
vacuum cleaners rule
used car
crazy wife
crazier life
now that's a neat package
'til it's not

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Jack is good
Smirnoff bad
mirrors in front
noise in back
cacophonous peanut shells below
orchestrating stubby pencil
upon napkins write
verse or prose
doesn't matter
rewrapping
neat packages those 'til

'til glad hand extends
binds me in different wrappings
dust jacket shines
mail box stays empty
dust jacket gone


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Someday
an old shep will appear
giving neat packages
for me to bag and seal
while we
walk the walk
bark the talk
shuffle left
shuffle right
finding straight ahead

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Breath's final
boxed package
patiently waiting
to be lowered

but until then

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Reviewed on October 15, 2017
You took us frame by frame to the point where the shuffle begins and, yes, to just waiting to die. Touching and truthful.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 15, 2017
Pictures are supposed to convey a thousand words. But you have managed to convey snapshots in few words very nicely. Some of these match my memories quite well. You made me recall the brief. When my brother was a dedicated Fuller Brush man beating down country roads and wearing out my car in the process.

That last little snapshot hasn't happened yet, and I don't think there will be any pictures of yours or mine (I'm not going to be boxed). ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 14, 2017
Images of a lifetime captured in poetic form that will never fade.


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