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Gaming the Third Rail

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For those embracing: “one makes his or her own reality” the calculated risk of opportunities presents all kinds of rewards.

Sunday, August 12, 2018


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Gaming the Third Rail


One’s carefree 20's say: “flirt with it.”
40's say; “not on my watch.”
60's say: “made it across the tracks.”
Finally, life says: “Ollie, ollie, oxen free!”

Off the full-retiree goes…

Golf course by day.
Country club by night.

Off the semi-retiree goes...

Part time work by day.
TV at night.

And common to most seniors,
third rail fear continues non-stop,
with its ever-ubiquitous warnings.
never flirting with risk,
never assumes immunity,
never considering chance without assured success.

There are, however, the others
knowing not retirement,
still willing to explore through unlocked doors,
stroll a city’s unbeaten paths at night,
view calculated risk as a senility-deterrent.

Like a subway schedule,
mobility might slow to less movement after sundown,
often with fewer start and stop options,
but relieved of the anxious rush hours,
inviting that piece of time that allows more relaxed movement
like exploring car to car,
platform to platform,
late nights to early mornings,
where greeting a new day means
another yesterday has been challenged and archived.

Such are these intrepid few still gaming Life’s third rail,
whose venturesome identity remains an option,
an awareness that self-assured motion
is but electric energy surging forward to the next pause,
still allowing sparks and verve to remain the unwavering motivation
for mischievous diehards.



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Reviewed on August 25, 2018
Some people just need to take dangerous chances. I really enjoyed reading this one!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 13, 2018
If not on the third rail by now, I believe you are headed that direction. I'm stuck in 1/2 rail right now. My mind is there but my body isn't going there anytime soon. But my twin brother is clearly full-time-retired by your definition.

Your poem gives us great insight into the possible life options, after…, but before lights out.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on August 12, 2018
I walked away from what I consider the Third Rail many, many years ago. Looking back I feel nothing but happeness that I managed to make it through to the end, where I began my transformation.

Reviewed on August 12, 2018
there are three words that crossed my mind while reading this piece: the urban-life-style, electric-shock, and die-hard-mutant. I like its up-tempo which approves the living form of the poem. The speed makes the old narrative fresh. Cheers, alex


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