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Eyes That See

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Many would argue waking up is more than opening one’s eyes. “In one sense homelessness is a physical situation. Either you have a place to go or you don't. In the higher sense, which is the subject of this piece, in part, homelessness is a state of spirit, an inability to see one's own place of being, or simpler, an inability to see one's own beingness. The place of home is where you are, and if you are not present, seeking that which is outside of yourself, seeking something not-you to contain you, then you will never be anything but homeless, regardless of shelter. – D. Berkey. (Image by pineterest)

Tuesday, March 19, 2019


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Eyes That See

Bus stops for some,
rest stops for the weary,
hitching posts for grocery carts,
always at the ready,
an urban luxury for many.

Benches support the waiting,
while sun and wind present airborne reflections,
kaleidoscopic yesterdays broken,
yet always connected.

Golden candy wrappers
dance dervish imaginings
alongside shards of clear plastic,
stained-glass windows floating atop

gutter-motes of air.

How lonely it must feel,
these broken fragments once whole,
wandering aimlessly from street to street,
begging but to be.

But like innocence before the reaper,
the scythe of Time remains sharp,
forever altering life’s movement,
even as human roots bereft of youth
endlessly seek refuge and deliverance

beside the fast lane of litter and irresponsibility.

May it never be forgotten…


Homelessness takes many forms,
forever hovering around us,
mere patience-in-waiting
hoping to arrest complacency
for eyes that see.

 

 



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Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 20, 2019
yes so true and so sad
budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 20, 2019
I have slept on a picnic table, on a roll of wire fence in the desert (avoiding snakes) and on the green grass of a churchyard/cemetery. But only for one night before continued driving to the long destination. To have to do that, night after night, hopefully finding a place that is out of the elements of rain, cold, or disruption by authority, must be difficult and frightening. But I am told that a good portion of those "out there," will not come in from the cold because they don't want to. For the others, it would be best if we provided something better than a bus stop. Big cities we are already providing public restrooms on the street. Perhaps we could provide warm/cool on hot nights shelters for overnight sleeping and shelter from inclement weather that could be temporarily used by those with no home.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 20, 2019
"Bus stops for some,
rest stops for the weary,"

What a wonderful pairing of lines to set the tone for the rest of thos most excellent poem, Odin.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 20, 2019
I have sensed this feeling, but never once thought of trying to put it into words. What must the survivors feel who witness the rubble of a crashed airplane with thier loved ones covered in the debris. Or find their children murdered in school at the hands of a deranged shooter. Tornadoes and floods carry away homes but not the homelessness.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 19, 2019
Bad enough as a physical reality, but when it takes over the mind, then we are really in trouble, lost amid the rubble. As you said in the poem: The scythe of time remains sharp; forever altering life's movement." So true.


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