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A Willow Tree's Lament

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For some, healing comes only after the unexpected offers trust and respect. All should be as fortunate as I am.

Friday, October 15, 2021


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A Willow Tree’s Lament

 

Her ache
Touches me
Like a run-away train
Longing to be of meandering stream

 

 Her voice
A soft echo
The timbre of past life remembering
Its movement a willow tree's lament

 

She walks
Paths unseen by most
Holding my hand
Maternal nature unbound

 

When sleeping
The quiet of her breath
Weaves thatched cover
Securing my storm-filled dreams

 

 Upon awakening
My mind begs the heart calm
My spirit fearful of day's dawning

 

She beckons I return to her side
Stroking my cheek
Assuring me
There be no light out there
Not already within me

 

What healing comfort
This lifetime
Before her/my eyes

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 20, 2021
A lovely and meaningful poem, Odin. You probably will want to and another "l" in your title and make it "Willow." I often make typos and I appreciate it when others point them out so that I can edit and correct them. Love and peace to you,

Regis. 🍁

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 16, 2021
I'm not sure how to take this. It seems like your good fortune was at the expense of the willow tree. Hence, the tree's lament.

Weeping willows are certainly caressable but they don't give one a hug like mammals love to do. I can see observing one might help one's perspective on life. But they are rather short-lived for a three and often damaged by storms. Not a good example of strength and resilience.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on October 16, 2021
Such tender beauty in these words
that touched my heart…

Diana…🌿

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 16, 2021
The her/she in this is an intriguing character, one filled with insight and compassion. The rational part of my brain assumes you're talking about your beloved wife. The artistic part of my brain conjures your muse. Come to think of it, could be one in the same. (-: Loved it. Peace.... rlc

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 16, 2021
You must have awakened from a very peaceful
dream to have penned such an expository rendering.
If wine is your secret, tell us more...

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 16, 2021
"Assuring me

there be no light out there

not already within me."



Lines like this that raise the level of the verse to more than what it is. A tender, lilting poem that fills the heart.


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