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Life's Quiescent Cacophony

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For some of us, simple beginnings elude our memory as we attempt to keep our balance with life’s everyday distractions. As writers, such pauses of silence to quietly reflect seem priceless at times. If we’re lucky, propitious remembrances can cultivate latent ink for the pen. (Image by pinterest)

Saturday, November 6, 2021


Poem Artwork

 

Life’s Quiescent Cacophony

 

Space

 

Upright center,

she peels potatoes
before windows gray of gray,
between outside fences bent
over winter's sequined blight.

 

Skitter skitter,
snow creatures prance lacework
upon the snows,
weaving crystal tapestry
for boredom's mind-time fun.

 

Spread before

 

plates once whole,
chipped ancestry now,
wait patiently to serve
our sunshine in gray.

 

Across the room

 

cast iron boils
color guard to the ready,
purple beets,
green roots aplenty,
ready spud white morsels,
slice,
slice,
plop,
plop,
dash of this,
dash of that.

 

To the back

 

the kettle whistles,
beckoning near
mason jars of leaves in waiting,
the pleading begun,
take me,
take me,
won't you please?

 

Now before me

 

soldered cup of languid herbal flakes,
summer's much maligned gifts
float anxiously
beneath the steam.

 

Coming forward

 

mother's assuaged warning
recoils tiny hands,
tin handle too hot to grasp,
smiles fragrant wafts to calm the thirst.

 

To my right

 

father eyes smoke-dried meat
beneath more mason jar entombment,
their strips remaining tall,
forever brave their resolve,
knowing hunger waits for naught.

 

Around us all

 

we pick,
we choose,
we vanquish for the better,
say we,

while cowering prayer
silences the air,
bib-overalled penitence
foretells quaking quiet.

 

All is ready

 

folded apron-dried hands
ladles the bounty,
while continuing outside,
saber winds beget tiny icebound shards
through glass windowed stages,
nature's boundless repertoire.

 

And so it went

 

for this youth
with hidden eyes,
and silent echoes,
through endless seasons
held fast
by voices within,
building choruses
continuing on with more of

life's quiescent Cacophony.

 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 7, 2021
Precise imagery makes for a fine piece of (fictional? biographical?) reminiscing. Your ability to write visually is uniquely you. Must be the old movie maker in you. Enjoyed this. Peace.... r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 7, 2021
I was prepared to hear of your view of today's multitasking split second timing of multiple stimulus worldwide at our doorstep background noise. Instead, you wrote of what taking time off from all of this busyness results in… A blast from the past!

You have so eloquently described your vivid memory of Depression-era times for a Mormon family held together by devotion and hard work against the hard winter that always came and you had to be prepared with all kinds of preserved staples from the bounty of summer. I, too, remember those times but they seem to be warmer and much less bleak, when compared to yours.

For anyone who has not seen the artistry of Jack Frost on windows, they have missed a wonderful treat… Especially when it is forming right before your eyes and making wonderful cracking sounds. Almost magic in a very bleak time of the year. I guess that's why I welcomed cold fronts with their heavy snows, their blizzards howling, or even ice storms turning the whole landscape into a crystal wonderland.

One of your very best, written like no other could.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on November 6, 2021
I see something bristling with life and color and sound. But plenty of cold and white and gray. It also is old and simple and surviving. There is a painting in this poem and the hues are muted, washed and worn. I like the simpleness of the “slice/slice/plop/plop” which is wonderfully grounding. The piece holds for me a kind of sad orderliness, and the words ‘silent echoes’ from the youth with hidden eyes makes me think here is the main character. Viscerally illustrative writing, bringing all that together in one piece. ~~ I like it. ~~ djl


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