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His Elusory Something

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

- For many, the journey needed to arrive is fraught with tears before smiles dare appear. (Image by Pinterest)

Monday, December 20, 2021


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His Elusory Something

 

He wondered…

 

Was it the sight of neediness

By way of two girls finding comfort in their dolls

While sitting on the steps of a building

Whose windows were shattered

Doors were blackened

Brownstone grayed

By impoverishment’s insistence?

 

Might it have been…

 

Discerning the mix of fragrances

Wafting from the sidewalk flower stand

Its proprietor sharing his effervescent smile

As he wrapped the munificent stems of redolence?

 

Perhaps…

 

It was the young woman wheeling her baby carriage

Through pedestrians focused on going another direction

The where of their focus most likely

A delusion of what they thought they needed

Even as he ran after the young woman

Whose child in the pram was him

Being pushed into the uncaring crowd.

 

Purpose showed…

 

Lost in the mass of strangers

Feeling as though risen from a long illness

He couldn’t deny the evolvement of munificent perception

Knowing paths traveled were needed

For his being able to see the world

Through his heart.

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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on December 27, 2021
Well, this one — its tender observance. This radiates sensitivity, a key characteristic I find in much of your writing. Identifying with others is an element as endangered as ‘truth’ anymore; so for me, the more artists who paint, sing, sculpt, dance, make music, or write about compassion and harmony with their fellow human beings, the better. The act of noticing is apparently becoming extinct {“The where of their focus most likely/A delusion..”} — poetry is a capture, and this ‘capture,’ so full of observation, gets my attention thoroughly. Brevity in word count, massive in message = Paths traveled were needed in order to see. You have skill in that here, with the glimpses that are glass windows into the scenes, I feel as though I see them, too. Stunning surprise: “Whose child in the pram was him/Being pushed into the uncaring crowd.” Shiver-worthy poignancy, that. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 21, 2021
I believe I know him and so many others like him. Insisting on walls to be built up between their psyche and those of others on our great planet of diversity reflected more and more in our own backyards.

You show his fear of the unknown based on the perception of slices of life he does not know from lack of real experience.

Doogie Houser, the child doctor, now grown up but still very intelligent, told us today on morning TV that we all need to go out and visit, immerse ourselves, in what we fear or hate. What will happen is that we will be able to understand others from their point of view, and become more open-minded, empathetic and happier as a result.

But beware of religion as a solution to unhappiness. It may give one inner solace but not improve one's wider view of the world and the people in it.

Ron


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