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Holiday Wrappings of Another Kind

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Here we are once again reminding ourselves of the traditional way of holiday celebrations. 2021 will go down as a year when the fear of stuff not making the trip from dock to one’s store, door and website. But, seems the supply lines have given many the surprise ending they dreamed of. But…

Wednesday, December 22, 2021


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Holiday Wrappings of Another Kind


‘Tis greater to give than receive,
begging the question: “Of what?”

Stuff remains the easy answer,
cloaked in its brightly colored paper and ribbons,
urging “Oohs and Ahs” from receivers
few can resist.

But what of a kind gesture in place of goods,
the finding of compassion and sympathy for the truly less fortunate,
exercising that ephemeral spark of humanity once primary,
but now rapidly becoming an endangered principle of our species.

Hope hangs on…

The aware heart knows,
like much of nature,
humanoids can’t last forever,
that gathering of a materialistic image,
buttressing the seductive illusions of generosity,
be they religious or secular,
knows only an all-consuming downward spiral,
a self-destructive glitter that blinds
as it drills deeper into itself,
disintegrating at the end
into the loss of “caring,”
fate’s special delivery to a wide-awake darkness.

How habitual these temporal leanings.

How belittling today’s wrappings

to what innate benevolence once was.

 

Holiday wrappings of “kindness” hopefully

are not in short supply.

 

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on December 27, 2021
Your title is commensurate with that image of ‘wrappings’ being a blanket, a deeply-needed blanket. Of another kind….what contrast you write of, material vs. humane compassion. I like the term “aware heart” — as well as “illusions of generosity.” You have managed the portrayal of ‘surface giving,’ being the antithesis of ‘innate benevolence.’ Yellow highlighter goes over these two lines: “How belittling today’s wrappings/to what innate benevolence once was.” I just love those two lines and they are why my family constellation relinquished material gift-giving more than a decade ago; a video call is vastly more precious. This theme of yours is one of my favorite topics on which to write. It can never be overstated, I feel. ~~ djl. Thank you*

Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on December 25, 2021
this was truly heart warming and so true!!! this time of year brings pain for me but my pain has taught me to help others and that is my healing. yes holiday wraps are many and God sees us, sends angels to test our hearts. he is watching and knows every number of hairs on our heads and hearts

Reviewed on December 23, 2021
Your message truly come from the heart as it certainly touches the heart, Odin! Let us all share the generosity expressed by your warm words. May your holidays be peaceful.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 23, 2021
There is enough wealth in this great nation, perhaps in the entire world, according to economists like our very own Ed Phillips, to give, every year, every family or citizen and income of $75,000 a year.

You say, that the incompetent and greedy will waste all that money? There is also enough money to pay for guardians, mental health care, and everything else, giving the individual an opportunity to pay taxes, pursue possible occupations that might result in high income and otherwise live a life of freedom from fear of abandonment, starvation and cold.

I just read the wonderful story of a student poet laureate from Stanford who lost everything after Katrina and had to live on the streets of New Orleans because his Social Security could not pay for rent and food. By living on the street for over 10 years, he at least had food. A reporter found him, learned his story and located his college best friend who had been looking for him ever since Katrina had stopped their communication. Others joined in and raised funds to get him an apartment and back into writing again.

Ron


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