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Many Blind Eyes

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

In a political season of certain voter rights held hostage, it’s easy to argue some things never change like the continuing prevalence of inequality.

Monday, November 7, 2022


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Many Blind Eyes


A mother of swirling black smoke bore you
Bundled in burlap
Atop burning earth's dust bowl.

Before you

A life of sweat tainted tobacco leaves and cotton bales
Shrouded in tight braids of hate's acrid air.

While above...
Only your father's cries of mercy
Filled the grit dense clouds,
As Jim Crow rode the thunder,
Looking down to make more the same,
More swaddling to construe miscreant.

Still

Painfully

Some of us peering skyward at earth’s rotunda

And considering history,
Observe many bigoted souls gazing through dulled lenses
Seeing not stars sparkling.


We remind ourselves
The past always sends forward its remains
To be a haunting presence,
Helping us see
What we are truly looking at…



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on November 9, 2022
Striking image. Your opening is stunning, completely breath-taking. That first line made my eyes widen! “grit dense clouds” “rode the thunder,” this writing is muscular and gutsy. I like what Ron said, “…continuing hatred instead of giving a hand up.” Respectfully ~~ djl

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 9, 2022
Indeed, it is the past the reminds us of what we (humanity) have done, what we should avoid doing, and what we need to do. A thoughtful piece.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 8, 2022
Yes, it's hard enough to come up with a way to give equity to people who have been so mistreated in the past. But to continue that hatred, as though the lessons of the past were to remain hidden or forgotten like they didn't exist, is unconscionable.

As long as there is hatred and mistrust of our fellow human beings, just like us, there will be inequity, in spite of the hypocrisy of holding up tokens as though they were enough compensation for what we have done.

The new code word for hiding the past from history is called, woke. But it's out there, readily available--true history. And anyone can now see what we've done to ourselves by continuing hatred instead of giving a hand up.

Ron

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on November 8, 2022
beautiful piece. i love how you described the past that haunts us. it is always sent forward, whatever we draw from the now and label it with the past, it will and will always appear in our future. unless, we learn to uproot and replace it. thank you for this piece.


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