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Legacy Levitating

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

- Bequeathment of stuff as the sum total of the deceased legacy looms prominently in the minds of most. Fortunate is the inheritors of that which is beyond value… remembrances of a life fully lived beyond the material.

Wednesday, January 25, 2023


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Legacy Levitating

 

Above one

Floats one’s anonymity

A purpose needing not identity

Nor reason to leave cliches behind

Just a moment of remembrance

Left for those in need

The living ready for purpose

 

For what is a dollar

A house

A stock certificate

But impersonal acquisitions

Anyone can leave behind

 

To be selective

To show one cared

One spent life in devotion

Found expressions

In music

In paintings

In writings

In the final touch to another’s hand

 

Such becomes glimmerings of the past

From the attic of the mind

The cherished feelings of the heart

Endowments that create ancestry

Worth commemorating

Often challenged by the greedy

Made to float above the wisdom of the caring

The halo of always alive

Mindful whispers from the past

A love forever hovering with honesty

 

Existence joyfully transitioning

Into its next means of being

Perhaps an attachment

Atop a shooting star

Destination

Unknown

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 25, 2023
Stuff we have left over says nothing of us as you have clearly described. But a name, reputation or other offering carries far beyond one's life as you have so well portrayed in your prostry here.
Unfortunately, terrible behavior goes down in history as well as very good behavior, unfortunately.

Robert Finley, and unknown blues song writer signed up for America's Got Talent at 68 and wowed the audience. He now has an album of his original work, Sharecropper's Son. It's never too late to create a destiny.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 25, 2023
If there is any merit to it, it's this: 'a legacy is not leaving something for people, it's leaving something in people.' Something good. Something lasting. So that when they remember you, they do so with kindness and respect. Each of us influences those around us every day with what we say and do and write and share. At some point though, all of that is forgotten, and then the only thing they remember about you is how you made them feel. A stimulating piece. Thanks for sharing. Peace.... r

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 25, 2023
Perhaps, as you suggest in the poem, the most treasured things to be left behind are the valued memories that continue live in the lives of others into the future. The possessions left behind have little value of the person leaving them behind; they are just impersonal riches not "
worth commemorating" and are yes, "often challenged by the greedy." Well said.


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