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Layers of Living

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Most everyone spends time thinking about life and death. Worth pondering is Keanu Reeves answer to the question “What do you think happens when we die?” His answer: “I know that the ones who love us will miss us.”Jan 16, 2022 (painting by pinterest)

Saturday, August 19, 2023


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Layers of Living

 

Ripple or Storm,

It comes in such varied ways.

It may start out like a raindrop arresting quiet waters

Or like a skipping rock gliding across a pond,

A wager on how many lucky skips it will make.

 

Confusing as it may be,

Such a state of mind

Is like a monkey trying to touch his own reflection in the water,

But the touching causes the image ripples

To go outward, but then inward, right back at him.

 

Still…

 

Ever flowing is one’s life canvas of successes and mistakes.

Emotional colors coalesce,

Vying for happiness shades,

As existence seems calm at the moment.

 

Pigments of love and hate will continue

Blending their purpose

To dominate the essence of the moment,

Knowing another ripple or storm

Will subtly

Or

Aggressively

Add its layer of inevitable change.

 

For like it’s said,

Nothing stays the same.

Living life’s layers happily

Requires remaining aware,

Prepared for today’s

Mirror reflective waters

Or

Tempest waves

Running aground its layers of being

Becoming but a stratum of itself,

A two-dimensional remembrance

Atop the mantle of memories.

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 20, 2023
With an appropriate title, life is full of ups and downs, successes and failures. It's more how we handle them and our attitude that makes all the difference whether we end this life on good terms or bad.

From the wisdom of Forrest Gump we get, "Life is like a box of chocolates…" Everyone knows that experience who has tried a box of chocolates. That caramel, so sweet, always gets stuck on my teeth to irritation! And some of those fillers are downright poisonous!

We certainly do not know what happens after this life. But that's like not being able to understand the complex equations of string theory and then proclaiming that you know what is going on in the universe from a headline or two that you read in social media. Or have had repeatedly drummed into your brain from birth so that you can think of no other way. The perfect human drone going through life under those narrow cult rules promising a kind of lightness like being able to deify earthly gravity and even death.

As you can see, your poem draws from me many thoughts I can't help but relate.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 19, 2023
Layers of living resulting from the layers of experience that we undergo in the ebb and flow of life, as you said "knowing another ripple or storm will subtly or aggressively adds its layers of inevitable change. As life goes on, so does change. A truly philosophical poem.


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