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Life's Track One, Side Two

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As 2023 reaches midlife, the mind wanders into those thoughts of what a Senior can do better in this year’s latter half. Some of us are indeed fortunate to have been encouraged to think and advance out of the box at an early age and make it a habit.

Friday, September 29, 2023


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Life’s Track One, Side Two


It was time.
He knew it.

Like the cuts on so many of Life’s albums,
As he passed through the “got your attention” of side one,
He’d often considered the “time to acknowledge some chancier experiments” of side two.

Yeah…
Back then, even though he was only thirteen,
His father had been prophetic.
After all, how many fathers would think to give some philosophy
As a birthday gift.

But that was long ago and now it was time to totally reject

Society’s pre-ordained lifetime marketing blitz on how to live
And allow the oft times sleeper ideas

To awaken some final discovery.

Just like his life of producing persuasive long-playing albums of thought,
Creating safer decisions for side one was only rewarding
When there was risk mixed in, usually on side two.

Today…

He was going to welcome the task of searching,
Go beyond the choices he had been living,
Gamble on the unexpected,
Travel down the multitiered senses
Where less familiar ideas
Might surprisingly muster appreciation

For more of a being’s tempo,
Rhythm,
And harmony.

When he thought about it…

How enticing that flip side of the so-called normal existence has been,
Finding out what one’s unknown appreciations were all about
That discovery of a finger-snapping epiphany
Ready to produce surprises for the future.

Lest he forget
Passing time was becoming more precarious
Making life’s Tomorrow a hit
Would require risk of another kind.

He recalled his father’s birthday message at thirteen,
“Embrace the unexpected,
Indulge the inordinate,
Find the willingness to try track one, side two of your days.
It’s waiting.”



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 30, 2023
Your thoughts are easy to resonate with. Love those 'finger snapping epiphanies,' as you put it. More often than not they can help clarify the direction of our lives. One thing is for sure (as C.S. Lewis proffered) .... you cannot go back and change the beginning, but you can certainly start where you are and change the ending. Enjoyed this. r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 30, 2023
A beautifully rendered comparison between living one's life one way and then, on side two, discovering even more from an entirely different point of view.

My first gift from my parents, my mother, particularly, who laid away $10 a month for a year so that my brother and I could have the benefit of the World Book Encyclopedia so that all of our questions about facts could be answered by going to that good book.

And my 2nd side two came when I was 20. Becoming paralyzed entirely changed the direction of my life.

Your poem had special meaning for me.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 30, 2023
I very much like the image evoked of the side oner and side two tracks of life since its truth really hits home. A father's birthday message at thirteen is well worth remembering and repeating.


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