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Creation

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Why must the spoils of fame's fortune so often trump consciousness? What kind of person wishes name notoriety (and all the obligations of fame) over acknowledgment of his or her work as an influence, a contribution to making life more meaningful? Perhaps a chronic narcissist, but not an artist whose work is his or her existence. When all is said and done, names are forgotten, but the influence by and of an artist's work lives on. Thus, the quest for anonymity's signature has much to offer.

Monday, November 27, 2023


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Creation

Walking through a surreal forest of abundance
not yet pruned of its integrity
one ponders the sunlight
as it continues its respectful hide-and-seek play with shade

For encroachment plods ever closer
leaving behind that which once grew from roots long nourished
by nature’s faithful light and dark presence
only to now fulfill but man's harvest of covetous want

Few know such anonymity
for seedlings from laboratories of progress
fly aimlessly from life's innocent Petri dish
and become the polluted breath of greed

What price this convoluted harvest of Want
once rendered by life's moisture
once absorbed for mind's growth
but now worshiped as mist for the insatiable fog of deception?

Will our children always strain to see this vapid forest for the trees
as its rapidly disappearing shade
makes inhospitable and barren
the now seared once organic-rich carpet of opportunity?

And what of our mental landfills
for discarded prospects
once of passion
once of thought
once of envelopes' pushed?

Will our youth too be sown under
by the earthmover's blade
only to reach up into dusty residue
for that which we denied them?

Beware the darkness outside night's magic
for it knows not of sunrise or sunset
only the shroud of conceit
that blackens one's ether into dark clouds
to suffocate the light of
creation for its own sake


 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 29, 2023
Creation by natural selecting of the fittest (most produced offspring) has let us to those who wish to, through self conceit, stand out among the crowd as better, some way. But, perhaps, not. With nothing to offer but their fading beauty or charisma, not the quality of their work.

You have a point about being anonymous. Richard has listed some examples. I often read some quote somewhere… Some saying… That is noted, "anonymous."

Ron

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on November 28, 2023
Well written and filled with complex symbolism that makes it a joy to read for the analytic mind.


Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 27, 2023
There are a host of literary works still available that have survived the ages, and the authors remain anonymous. "A Presidential Novel," "Sir Gawain and the Green Knight," "Beowulf" (one of my favorites) etc. I'm convinced that those who create, and those who explore original thought, honestly, for their own sakes, will continue creating and thinking longer, and more fruitfully, than those who just do it for fame or fortune. As always, a thoughtful insight, that compels the reader to think. Enjoyed. r


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