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Gold Framed Experience

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

We often think that the key to success and happiness is weathering a challenging experience in living… taking every up and down with a sense of “whatever is happening, it needs to happen.” But, oh how battle-strewn are those experiences in trying to stay of normal stature. If one harkens back to ancient philosophy, one will find the minotaur — as built by Daedalus in Knossos—as a mythical creature that symbolizes our deepest fears and desires lurking in the shadowy labyrinth of our unconscious. The creature also represents our complex nature as individuals, a mixture of animalistic desires and god-like aspirations.

Saturday, February 3, 2024


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Gold Framed Experience

 

Having lived with zest and naked exposure

Experience can be challenging

 

How today’s living is handled

Against yesterday’s possible mishandling

Weighs heavily on the psychic of honesty

 

Anecdotal happenings can mount up in a single day

Bringing a tsunami of rush across one’s defenses

 

And all…

 

Started with birth’s first burst of crying

The dawn of life suddenly surrounding innocence

Beginning the journey living had in store

 

Childhood

 

Crying and laughter

Mud pies and 5-cent lemonade

Cotton candy and helium balloons

Funhouse dizziness

Rollercoaster thrills

 

Adolescence

 

One’s first kiss

Discovering private parts developing

License to drive

Traffic chaos

Study

Party

Prepare for SATs

 

Young Adulthood

 

Serious courting

Get engaged

Don’t get engaged

Cozy up for the raise

Discover the bonus as prison

 

Adulthood

 

Family

Births

Mortgages

Anxiety

Feeling no purpose

Finding purpose

Expressing opinions

Alienating some

Befriending others

Independence cost

 

Old age

 

Weeping in a pillow

Remembering when crying was expected

Staring into nothingness

Smiling at one’s totality

Appreciating goodness

Knowing it took some bad

To find the good

 

Experience

 

Begins to fade

Stroking your cat that all is well

Offering your hand for the dog’s lick of hello

How are you

Not so good

I see

Desperation holds firm to certain memories

 

Darkness

 

Seeing through the maze what might be beyond

Hearing the importance of what’s left

Smelling the articulation of Nature’s breath

Tasting the nectar of passing

Touching the hand leading you…

 

Such a journey

This labyrinth of experience

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 3, 2024
Another of your journeys through life and what it teaches us. I think the key is learning from your experience.It may be golden or painful depending upon what happened.



Like my learning at 7 years of age that smoking was not a good thing and causing damage from a cigarette lighting fire was criminal behavior--arson. So this "firebug" reformed and made sure that I didn't violate good sense laws or other people as much as possible.



However, I'm about to read an article by a well-known researcher in biology and he is stating emphatically that it is all karma: regardless of what we think, or think we have control, we are a product of genetics, our environment and dumb luck. There's no such thing as free will!



Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 3, 2024
Such a magnificent and succinct journey of experience through the various stages of life as we know it, with all its ups and downs. Such insight flows between the lines.


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