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Appaloosa Rust

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

To visit a long gone grandfather’s land reveals memories unshaken by the years.

Thursday, June 6, 2024


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Appaloosa Rust

 

Like a Norman Rockwell dedication to the post-Depression years,

A Grandfather’s farmhouse remained determined for another winter.

 

Much had changed over the years.

Lush farmland was now but leathery blisters

On green and yellow fields

Surrounding the crumbling battlement of an era.

 

A stalwart farmhouse remained poised for collapse

Like it had for years.

 

Peering through the glass less window into the living room,

The old pastel nautical design of seashells in resin

Had become the ravaged ceiling’s collage of a

Weather-caked miniature beach.

 

Once white-painted driftwood and nets,

Hung precariously wind torn from the remaining ceiling.

 

A turquoise sign above the coal stove reading “My Happy Place”

Hung precariously with the weight of decades of soot and dust

Like a carpet of history.

 

Grandma and Grandpa

Once shining pride like the rubbish

Gathered about the old black white tv

Now but a fractured memory

A memory now imbued with the chipped veneer of their kindness

 

The old house caught a wind gust

Creaked like hollow trees,

Like dry bones touching one another.

 

Remnants of a lace curtain

Quivered its once fine threads

Like a million lifelines of desperate pleas to the breeze.

 

Unlike every crevice and corner

Of the farmhouse still standing,

Its insect accommodation maintained a “No Vacancy” haven

And to many a spider’s delight,

Nary a corner withstood the 8 legged squatter's-celebration.

 

My emotions surged up,

Yet tears were in waiting,

Like the way deserts wait for rain.

 

But then…

 

I came upon Grandfather’s old, weathered truck

Standing dilapidated in aged stagnation,

Metastasized rust in Appaloosa shaped erosion,

Bringing the belated moisture to the eyes.

 

Time had taken possession

Of the wheels that taught me how to drive.


 

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on June 10, 2024
I differ from Ron’s guess that you wrote here what you lived. It is so richly real. At the same time, I think you are skilled at creatively detailing a story that is alive within its own fiction, Odin. This may be one of the great write-to-the-painting, or it may be the other way around. Either way, this is so well-written that it brought me the scent and sound of dry grass. Also delivered with presence….appreciation of days gone by….and the importance of them then and now. Very enjoyable, Odin. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 7, 2024
This was too real for you not having been there, done that. It was really poignant at referring to the old truck that you learned to drive in.

My younger brother took my mother to the farmhouse on the old homestead and videoed her finding objects in that house from her time growing up there in the 1925-30s. Unfortunately, that video was on VHS and I don't think that it has been digitized.

That painting reminds me of what one of our former authors here showed me that his brother did.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 7, 2024
That looks like old Mormon construction. The imagery was wonderfully effective in this. Revisiting old places that once held meaning, can (at times) be a healing experience. It's funny, the home (or homes) you grew up in, that you wanted to leave, can also (as you age) become the places that you yearn to return to. It's been that way for me. And there was always something to glean from it. Enjoyed this. Related. Peace... r

Reviewed on June 6, 2024
Your words brought back fond memories of "the good life", Odin. I had tears in my eyes when that last line of yours hit! Great write. Lots of emotion!!!!

Love ya!

Jane


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