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Light the Dark

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Having had the privilege of attending the play, “Art” a drama about 3 friends debating the merits of the friend’s exorbitant purchase of a modernist painting of pure white, nothing more. I began thinking about what a black dot would mean to such a painting.

Sunday, August 4, 2024


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 Light the Dark

 

 

The little bit of dark,

 A single black dot
Upon a canvas of pure white

Makes a bold declaration.


Vast and unblemished,
A silent expanse,
Where thoughts can drift freely,
Unconstrained by form or the colors of white.

 

Everyone has this point of reference,
Living amidst an endless achromatism,

Absorbing all white’s colors into the heat of black,
Draws the eye,
It’s contrast so stark,

Commanding attention.

Yet…

 

What experiences might the wings of this raven black take us to?
What discoveries lie within?


A world of possibilities,
Encapsulated in a dot,
A mystery to unravel,

A sea of calm,
A beacon of thought
Uncoupling questions in search of answers.

 

How focused its simplistic demands

On what may have been inherent complexities.


With dialogue between visible light,

And dark’s opaque density,

Our conscious and sub-conscious engage

In a dance of shared existence,

A personal landscape of contrast

Beckoning unknown expeditions

Into the wonders of heart and mind,

Perhaps deciphering one’s tableau vivant.

 


 

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 5, 2024
Some artists, once they receive fame, like to see how far they can push the critics. Releasing a series of canvas in shades of different white to see what the critics will say about it is one way to poke holes in a critic's prior disdain for the successful artist's work.

You have waxed very philosophical in this poem describing in great detail the nuances of a black dot on white. Scientifically, you alluded to white light being made up of colors. Black, on the other hand, is merely the absence of light. Nothing more, nothing less. But get an art grade out into nature and see what kinds of prescription they deliver about the shades they see around them.

If I saw that hanging on the wall, I would pass it by knowing that it was an artist giving a critic the finger.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 5, 2024
An interesting concept that you have thoughtfully explored, raising issue well worth considering. Contrast is at the heart of our understand and at the heart of the human condition. Without the black dot highlighting the great plain of white, there is so much that we would never know. Such a thoughtful, thought-provoking poem.


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