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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Birthing Life's Canvas

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Sometimes the only solace for dealing with the “Separatist” nature of our time is to consider the paradox of “One.” (Painting by Dali)

Friday, June 6, 2025


Poem Artwork

 Birthing Life’s Canvas

 

 

From sketch dreams
to commitment,
Life's canvas
portrays like Surreal mapping,
intersections changing,
colors separating,
perspectives evolving.


Time nurturing  

Youth's playground,
like Calder’s Cirque,
invites suspended beginnings,
embracing the whimsical,
allowing simple choices.

 

Reach up,
Brush down,
Zig,
Zag,
Time waits.

 

We stare into the eye of the canvas,
toying our playful decisions,
convinced for now,
rainbows are without end.

 

Later…

 

Revelation dawns,
Time neither pauses nor stops
as colors mix,
hues collide,
youthful primaries abandon,

maturity's tendrils flatter new brushes,
splashing humor,
dabbing sadness,
swirling irony,
painting beyond picture,

Slowly,

From beneath the layered colors
the unimagined emerges,
bonds loosen,
intersections dissolve,
Rubik becomes ether,

like the stroke of a sable brush sans paint.


Time no longer matters.

 

Being steps aside.


Non-Being surfaces
amidst limitlessness whispers

of creative births

preparing to become

as One.

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 11, 2025
Chock full of mystery for me. But you conjured up lots of images, surreal ones, like the theme of the poem.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 7, 2025
from youthful delight (" youthful primaries") to maturities "tendrils" as time reshapes the journey of existence. Perhaps identity itself lives to the fullest until it dissolves into something larger than ourselves, in the the One. Finely penned.


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