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Glimmering Sans Glittler

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As many can attest to, often, nocturnal dreams seem more real than their counterpart played out in reality. (Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, September 20, 2025


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 Glimmering Sans Glitter

 

We once plated love like crème brûlée,
crackling warmth beneath a sugared shell,
each spoonful a promise
melting on the tongue of hope.

 

But desire, like leftovers wrapped in foil,
was tucked away in the icebox of memory,
begging to be preserved,
a banquet paused mid-feast.

 

Time…

 

That frostbitten archivist,
sealed our passion in vacuumed silence,
where even breath grew brittle
and kisses crystallized like frozen patterns

on a winter window.

 

We tried to reheat the past,
microwaving old laughter,
defrosting apologies like soup gone thin,
but the flavor had fled,
leaving only the texture of regret.

 

Love, once a wildfire,
now resembled a snow globe,
beautiful, yes,
but shaken only satisfies nostalgia.

 

Even the heart,
a meat locker of sentiment,
cannot escape the gray fuzz of freezer burn,
where tenderness turns tough,
and longing tastes like cardboard.

 

Still…

 

We rummage through the cold,
hoping for one untouched morsel,
one ember wrapped in frostbite’s disguise.

 

So I ask…


Might there be redeemable life
for passion and tenderness
after freezer burn bruising?



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 21, 2025
"We tried to reheat the past,
microwaving old laughter,
defrosting apologies like soup gone thin,
but the flavor had fled,
leaving only the texture of regret."

With stanzas like this, you leave me wondering if I could ever write like this. And you are right about dreams. They rekindle old flames thought long dead. And if we write them down and post them, we get more comments than from ordinary stuff.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 20, 2025
A masterclass in metaphor, Love as Cuisine (creme brulee), while the leftovers of our desires are tucked away in foil, frozen in time, the heart as a "meat locker of sentiment", somehow both humorous and sad. The final question asks whether love can survive. Each of yes need answer that perhaps on our own. Most thought-provoking.

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on September 20, 2025
This is by far the most beautiful and to be honest quite enchanting poems, that I’ve read from you. And yes, to answer your question, there can be. However it doesn’t come easy. And perhaps it isn’t worth it. Depends on the situation. If there hasn’t been abuse involved.


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