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Bubbles Galore

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

One is lucky to escape the world of bubbldom. It is growing. Careful! (Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, March 28, 2026


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 Bubbles Galore

 

He drank it believing it was air,
foam ringing his mouth like praise,
his own reflection curved into success.


Notifications chimed like glasses clinking,
every agreement another layer of shine.
He told himself the sweetness meant truth,
that floating meant he’d finally arrived.

 

The walls thickened quietly.
Mortgage breath, diet belief, inherited fear.
He stopped hearing anything but his own pulse
echoing against soap‑slick certainty.


He mistook silence for safety,
insulation for wisdom,
and called the pressure comfort
because everyone else was holding it too.

 

When it broke, it wasn’t loud.
No sirens—just a sudden sting of air.
The ground didn’t vanish; it waited.
Cold, real, solid under his feet.
He inhaled without permission for the first time.
Don’t mourn the bubble.
It wasn’t home.
He’s free now.



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 28, 2026
It seems to be that the message here is that the world outside the bubble is where life actually waits. "The ground didn't vanish; it waited outside the bubble no doubt.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 28, 2026
Living in bubbles... sheltered in the 'safe zones' we create for ourselves. The place where people create their own realities to feel successful or complete. Sadly, many people live "in cages with the door wide open" as George Lucas put it. Some truth to that. Few anymore have the courage to live an authentic life, which requires honesty and moxie. Maybe one could say life is a series of bubbles, each one bursting with a lesson. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. r


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