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Corner Table Romance
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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Corner Table Romance


 

In a dark smoke filled room;
There was loud music; flashing neon signs;
Strangers meeting strangers; and friends I knew;
A good lookin' bartender; With a smile for all;
On the other side of all this madness;
That's where I found you


A corner table romance; 'Tween ol Jack and I;
Straight and over ice; He kept me high-
If the band played a waltz; That's what I'd do;
or the cotton eyed joe; well I could do that too


It was a bar room atmoshpere; I knew it well;
Spent all my nights, under it's good-time spell-
Runnin' from life; and all it's treacherous turns-
Lookin' for a one night stand; yeah I'd been burned


I wore the scars of heartache, for all to see;
hangin' round my neck; like a horse thief  from a tree-
That corner table romance 'tween me an ol Jack-
he kept the pain away; so I kept comin' back


I was on the dance floor when you caught my eye;
New face 'neath that stetson; I damn well wasn't shy-
I strolled right up and planted myself on the stool-
"hey cowboy; Wanna shoot some pool?"


You never looked up; Rack'em, you said;
while pushing that hat back on your head-
"What we playin' for?" then you grinned;
"I'll let you know, first you gotta' win"


From the pool table to the dance floor;
we slipped out the back door-
You walked; I followed; found your old Ford truck;
tailgate down; we talked of life and how it sucked


Then came the question; "Can I take you home?"
He smiled and said, "not tonight" I'm not here alone-
I wasn't lookin' for romance; Justa' place to drown my sorrows;
but like your friend Jack; I'll be here tomorrow


That corner table romance; 'tween me and ol jack;
kinda faded with the time; and I never looked back-
The cowboy neath that stetson? We've raised five kids since then;
That was twenty years ago; But we'd do it all again


© Lisa Hilbers
1/9/06







 

 

 
 


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 Reviews of "Corner Table Romance"
Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
What a wonderful story this is, Lisa. I'm glad you and "ol' jack" finally parted company, he is the devil in a smoothe disguise and like a mirage, he fades from view when you move in close, looking for compassion and a little dishonest modesty. Good thing that cowboy walked in or your life might have taken a much different pathway. I love story poems and this one is a 10!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
a compelling write, well penned Lady Lisa and enjoyed.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
An extremely enjoyable read.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
Great tale, Lisa... well told. I enjoyed this, thanks.

Glad to see you're still here :)

Hugs,
Tami

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
Oh... Lisa! Sad tale with a great ending; we never know what fate will bring, do we? Though I must admit, a dangerous place to come across it. Very well written. Loved the ending. ~~Carmen

Reviewed on January 9, 2006
Lisa,

Excellently penned, a compelling read and lovely poem. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
Very good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
A short story told with poetic finesse!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
This is really good...wonderful in imagery and flow...great compositon...Well done, Lisa.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
Very nice tribute to your own cowboy
Yes...you never know when love will turn up on your doorstep
Very enjoyable write Lisa !
Peter

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
A slice of fantasy that became reality.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
I have a similar tale. Good one.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
Nice tribute to your cowboy this was sweet.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2006
That a cute one, Lisa.
Enjoyed reading.

Elizabeth


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