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Our Very First Time
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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Our Very First Time




 

Our first time; Spirits free; We
explored each other-
Rose petal blushes; Candy hearts;
Passionate touches;
Remember? Our very first time?




The night air was calm; Unlike our
needs-
Walking side by side; Hand in hand;
allowing desire to take the lead-
We paused beneath the full moon's light-
watching the stars; On this clear Spring night-
You kissed me, Remember? Oh...I do...
I remember how you gently leaned into me-
I remember how it felt...How it felt so
right-




Face to face; Our eyes they met;
I saw in yours a place for me-
In mine were dreams; Oh sweet harmony-
It was you and I together; Doing a
sultry midnight dance-
We still weren't sure; but willing to
take a chance-
Do you remember? Oh....I do...
I remember how our eyes refused any
imperfections-
I remember how beautiful you said I was;
and how badly I wanted your affections




'Neath blue satin sheets; O'er our
nakedness, they slid-
Evenly they flowed like the rivers' swollen
waters; No secrets; Nothing hid-
Do you remember? Oh....I do...I remember
how we lay silently spent; Cradled comfortly
in the susurration of pleasurable sighs-
Do you remember? Oh....I do...It was our
very first time; It was yesterday; Many years ago;
That's why today; I still love you so




© Lisa Hilbers
1/20/2006






 


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 Reviews of "Our Very First Time"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 22, 2006
If everyone could have a first time as special as this then I don't think marraiges could ever go wrong. Thank you for sharing something so warm and personal with us.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 22, 2006
Beautiful Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on January 22, 2006
Very beautiful and uplifting, and romantic,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2006
What a hell of a nice love poem, a love that lasted, that in itself is miraculous. I have one like that too. ain't it fun?

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2006
Beautiful poem Lisa. I believe that we can make every time like the first time.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2006
heart touching and so romantic.

Reviewed on January 20, 2006
Blessed are those that can reminisce their romance.

"Our Very First Time" sings the dreams of a dreaming season of
love and romance.

I enjoyed the reading of "Our Very First Time".


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 20, 2006
Lisa,
Very beautiful and tender write. My wife and I will celebrate our 39th anniversary on the 28th of January. I definitely still remember and I'm sure she does. Something Blessed and Special never dies.


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