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Forever isn't a Promise
by Sara Carlson → (All Poetry by Sara Carlson)
  
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Forever isnt a promise,
I know it now all to well.
Take your heart and save me,
Cast me down to hell.
Take away whatever,
Keep me mentally sane,
Kiss me hard with reason,
Hold back all my pain.
Look me in the eyes,
Wipe away my tears,
Repeat those overcompensated words,
Instill an illogical feal.
Say you'll never leave me,
Lie to me one more time,
Pretend those evils never existed,
Tell me you'll never make me cry.
Watch me walk through a restless sleep,
Stare at me as Im in your arms,
Whisper sweet words beneath your breath,
Take me under with your charms.
Be with me in my silence,
make me feel complete...
Lead me on until you let go,
and give into loves defeat.


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 Reviews of "Forever isn't a Promise"
Reviewed by Juliet Tyler
Reviewed on December 6, 2002
Excellent truly excellent

Reviewed by Mary Anne McGuiness (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2002
Soooooo many 10's!!! You're the best writer I've ever met Sara, in the words of Andrea 'Rock On'!

Reviewed by hi
Reviewed on October 2, 2002
hihihihihihihihihihihi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Ashley
Reviewed on October 2, 2002
hey , ur the best writer along wit nora and dan hehe....i wish i had ur talent in writing poems but i dont..o well..better u then me...have fun writing ur poems...buh bye

Reviewed by Ben
Reviewed on October 2, 2002
WOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Nora
Reviewed on October 2, 2002
u rock, sare...i don't know how you do it...amazing...i give it a 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on October 2, 2002
Very Very Nice!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on October 1, 2002
Excellent feelings expressed here! Promises? that's why I NEVER make them

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Reviewed on October 1, 2002
What a paradox!

Reviewed by a a (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2002
It's great to be back in the creative process again. Wonderful piece.


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