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A Dream Too Long
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Thursday, July 14, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A Dream Too Long

The song had just begun the music softly filled the air
Everything was calm and then I saw you standing there
And you were like a dream come true
The one I had been waiting for.

Some things were meant to be and this was ours alone
The pieces fit so well the puzzle neatly sewn 
But puzzles sometimes start to blur
Before the dream is gone.

How we danced as if the world was ours
We took a chance on love and headed toward the stars
We set our course so high we never looked away
Could we have missed that distant star when dreams got in our way?

So magical the trip so perfectly set in time
Our senses overflowed like poetry divine
But nothing ever stays the same
When dreamers dream too long
Or when the music fades away
And takes away the song.

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "A Dream Too Long"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 15, 2016
Guess that's why so many heavenly marriages end up in divorceville. But the sentiment in the poem is beautiful, especially before it faded with the music.

Ron


Reviewed by Charles Neff
Reviewed on July 15, 2016
Nostalgic and clever at the same time. A reverie that in brief flashes feels real. Is it a dream or a memory. You keep us guessing - and searching our own thoughts.
Charlie

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on July 15, 2016
Only the rarest of lovers can shift the magic of dreaminess which attracted them in the first place.

Reviewed on July 14, 2016
To be sure you have touched many with this poem as they have experienced such dreams but too soon wake up to find the dream is over. Sincerely expressed and received.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 14, 2016
Great love poem, Edward. You do know how to say the words that makes them something magical!

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 14, 2016
Magical dreams have a way of becoming un-magical with the onslaught of reality. An interesting poem. John

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Reviewed on July 14, 2016
Bittersweet poetry so beautifully penned, Ed ...

Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on July 14, 2016
Much sleep can bring on dream, even though, much sleep and dream can disappoint any person ...!
Lovely job, thanks for sharing!


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