I started this one 4 years ago. Got hung up on one word. Found it last night.
I called you witch priestess enchantress Told you- you were my love darling dream woman With wonderment I kissed you stroked you entered you But there is no definition endearment action That matches what you were to me
A story set in 10 years time where two bodies are found in the river NITH in Dumfries, south west Scotland. One is a blind musician and police informant while the other is Poppy, a young girl. It brings Mark and Carla together with different views i
Love this! For many reasons, but especially because
it conveys so much!
One word: Were. Everything is in past tense--so the love is over, I'd say. Excellent write with few succinct words--perfectly done!
Glad you found the word--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
I reread you because you deliver so much with brevity... and your written architecture suggests layers. I'm never disappointed. katy xox
Pass tense...but very fine write!!
Love Tinka
There is no word to define it!;-) Wonderful poem!
Alrisha