Womb warm and dark
The room surrounds us
While winter batters
screens
Left up since summer to
Rust In Piece
I read your body
in Braille
Soft sunken
Above the hard bone
Of your collar
Over breasts with
granite molded
nipples
My calloused fingers trace
A sweeping line
Down around and over
The hint of belly mound
Searching for lint
I find kinky curls
My breath comes hard
Short gasps
The Marlboro Man's a lousy lover
Whose wind deserts him
And I am left dry mouthed
Hand in gland
Lying beside you
Beneath the chenille battleground
Where "Avon Calling"
Wars with sweat
You did
I did
We did
Together
While Eros' smile
Softens the dark
zooooooom! :) this is wonderful...you have a certain flair with words...outstanding! :) (((HUGS))) and love, zoomie :)
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2002
Swooooooooooon... sigh. To lay in the shadow of W.B. and ponder this poem.. its simply delicious.. I love the way you weave words.. completely appealing. katy. xox.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2002
very fine...
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2002
just lovely. So nice to eroticism done in a tasteful way.
Reviewed by Patsy Burton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2002
Nice poem, I like the way you put words together and express yourself. I thought rust in piece was clever.
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