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Love is like an unsheathed sword
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Love is like an unsheathed sword.

Love is like an unsheathed sword.
When two are trying to keep it bright,
One pulls the grip,
One holds the sharp blade tight
Like it's the best reward.

It's strange,
But all can change.
You are the one with the handle.

And you will not pity your partner clenching cold steel.
Even seeing his bleeding skin, you won't feel.

Why?

Don't you remember your hands on the blade?
When there was no help, no mercy, no aid.
Don't you remember your own pain,
And your suffering in vain?

You should have to remember.
But it's like the old ember,
From the fire of the gone passion,
And your partner won't get your compassion.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
You should have to remember.
But it's like the old ember,
From the fire of the gone passion,
And your partner won't get your compassion.

So true, Lily. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
Very good metaphor.

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
a great poem you have here

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Fantastic write !

Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Reviewed on October 30, 2002
Great write.Thanks for sharing.

Afrika M.A.Abney

Reviewed by Joe McCarthy (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2002
Very cutting edge, this poem.

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2002
Excellent poem!

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2002
bravo my friend,glad you came on over to be with us,Charlie

Reviewed by Sara Wadington (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2002
Well written!! I enjoyed reading your works at WBM, looking forward to reading more here :)

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on September 27, 2001
Wow excellent*~* Lily! Hey I have a few poems in poetry.coms analogies also:)


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