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Books
· Simon the Snowman

· Beside Still Waters

· Under Amber Skies

· Coastal Whispers


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· Finding Ricky's Voice

· Worries Are Like Small Potatoes

· Five Generations of Women, Five Generations of Strength

· The Adventures of Gillyboat and Flea

· A Mug of Dreams

· The Man in Gray

· Parsley Rabbit Learned a Life Lesson

· All I Want for Christmas....

· The Grand Prize

· The Magic Bunny


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· Love Letters for Valentine's Day

· Daddy’s Spirit Keeps Fallen Fathers in Children’s Hearts, Year-Round

· Broadcasting Relationship “Status” (on a shirt)? Is It Funny or Desperate?

· Resurrecting Love at Easter: Is It a Good Idea?

· The X’s & O’s of Love & Romance

· Relationship Obituaries: A New Way to Move Forward?

· Marriage Proposals by Women: Tips and Is Trend Really for Leap Year Only?

· The “After-Valentine” Valentine’s Day

· Valentine’s Day Gifts: Are Secrets and Surprises Taboo?

· Re-gifting (for the Right Reasons)


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· Fleeting Verse

· As I Was Leaving

· A Letter to Emily

· Flying Free

· Life As I Now Know It

· For Susan Bachman – Missing from Pennsylvania

· Soft Light of Solitude

· Budding Relationships

· The Heartfelt Gift

· Her Courage

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Empty Box

by Jill Eisnaugle — Read all 611 poems by Jill Eisnaugle

A poem about loss, change and the struggle to adapt in the midst of a whirlwind of loss and change.

Tuesday, March 29, 2016

My heart feels like an empty box
Its core contents removed
A hollow place where love once thrived
Now lost and tattered bare
A shell where once a life made sense
But now all that has passed
Left only a nomad just wandering through
Oh how can this truly be

The place that once had been like home
Now awkward, lost, and broken
The ones within have up and changed
Now unrecognizable to most
I’ve nothing to offer; I’m lost in the fog
Feeling more and more distant each day
And still all the changes keep etching away
At the canyon where once sense had thrived

The vicious cycle know never an end
No rest, no sleep and more grief
More changes to bury the soul, evermore
As I slip ever further from view
Will this ever feel normal? Alas I can’t say
Too many unknowns to disclose
But try as I must to stay sane – oh I shall
For now, it feels I’m truly all that I have
© 2016 - Jill Eisnaugle's Poetry Collection



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Reviewed by Barbara Armstrong
Reviewed on May 16, 2021
Clearly you were in a dark place when you wrote this one, Jill. I hope things have gotten better for you by now, although, the pandemic sure isn't helping matters! Your poem touches the soul and heart. Beautifully written, although sad to think it is or was your life. Many of us have found solace simply by hiding in our 'empty box'.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on July 20, 2019
Reading about an empty box, while mine is on the verge of exploding. Yet the feeling of emptiness that you describe here is probably the result of an explosion... Will it ever feel normal, you ask, but who knows what normal is nowadays? We seem to have have lost all meaning. A pity, since meaning would be perfect to cure the emptiness of that special box.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 6, 2019
You have looked inside yourself and found the true you.

Reviewed by Barbara Henry
Reviewed on June 21, 2018
Such a thought provoking message that resonates with anyone who has suffered loss. Let me say, as one who has suffered loss, that time, much time, is needed to console, comfort and strengthen.

Thank you for sharing, and take the time needed to grow strength.


Continued success-
Barbara J.Henry

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 5, 2016
Powerful POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dadfire
Reviewed on March 30, 2016
Wow, very moving write. I think there are days when we all feel like an empty box, like a musical box that upon opening the lid, no music plays, just silence, wondering, what happened to the music of life.
I feel encouraged however by the line at the end about trying you must to stay sane and "oh I shall" and know you will too.
Dan

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 30, 2016
Let me caution everyone reading this that, based on your recent correspondence, life is quite good for you right now.

However, your poem, whether or not it may or may not be personal, is highly emotional and describes what can happen when our lives are turned over by events we couldn't foresee. I will just add that life struggles tend to make us stronger, and sometimes, happier, in the end.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 29, 2016
Moving and transparent. The greater the obstacle, the more glory in overcoming it. Being challenged in life is inevitable. Being defeated is optional. Adapting and moving forward - that's the challenge. Stand strong. Peace to you... r

Reviewed on March 29, 2016
How I can relate!!! Fantastic writing..........write on!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Stephen Pollard
Reviewed on March 29, 2016
Change, emptiness, loss and struggle is always difficult to deal with, especially when trying to navigate living daily in a world full of disfunction. No matter what the outcome, we must persevere through it all and continue to move onward.


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