Romance Unexpected (poem) by Joy L. Hale on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 28, 2013

It is akin to a fairytale when romance finds its way by chance...too many missed opportunities pass us by and we often are left later in our lives to wonder...what if? Now off to pt 2 to find what destiny has in store for this couple.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 21, 2011

It's wonderful when destiny hands us such a priceless surprise. So real and conversational, loved it.

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on July 10, 2011

Don't you forget this, Joy! There maybe some catching up to do, especially after coffee. Well done!

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2011

JOY, LOVE THIS INTRO...AND AM PART TWO WILL BE EVEN BETTER. GOOD WORK AS ALWAYS, ANNA

Reviewed by George Dominguez

Reviewed on July 8, 2011

Sounds romantic already. Got to read the 2nd half to find out the ending. Very well written Joy. It builds up to a where you just got to read the next part. Keeps you interested for more. God Bless George AKA THE WISE OLD OWL

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on July 7, 2011

Great start. I am certainly one that is well into "chance meetings."
"I won't stay long, I promise!" Ha, words said so many times by so many men... Okay, on to part two.
mARK

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 7, 2011

THERE IS NO WAY THAT I AM GOING TO MISS PART TWO(SMILE). GOD BLESS YOU JOY. I WISH YOU LOVE, 'WISDOM' & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 6, 2011

Awesome thank you for sharing this one with us
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 6, 2011

A wonderful experience well-shared through your verses, Joy. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on July 6, 2011

Wonderfully written indeed a sweet and romantic poem Laura

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

Well? How about tea? Nice way to get things stirred up Joy. Let the imagination flow. Well done indeed.

John Michael

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

Captivating and charming!
I'm hoping for a fairytale ending :)
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

i'll be looking for part two. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

....a couple I just got to know shared a story similar to this..it is fate indeed :) (btw they are now happily married)

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

Compelling with Intrigue
~Joy~
for the dilema that this poem
presents from your very expansive
imagination...wanting more of this
mystery solved...what will you write?

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

If this truly did happen....sounds like the beginning of something wonderful....

Anna

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

Hope this happened for real, because it sounds wonderful.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

Wonderful opening to a new chapter that promises romance unrestrained.

George

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

Nicely done, Joy ! Serendipity...

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

Off to a wonderful start, Joy,
'the magic hand of chance'
i love this and am looking forward to more.

John

Reviewed by James Johnston

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

Joy,A cliffhanger! Now I won't sleep a wink until Part 2. "Marriage loomed only as an outgrowth of happenstance; you met a person" and what will be the outcome? In frenzied anticipation, Just Jim