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Oh, Doctor. What Beautiful Brown Eyes You have!
by Joy L. Hale → (All Poetry by Joy L. Hale)
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As in Romance Unexpected and Romance Unexpected Part Two, I write about a fictional protagonist called Vanessa. Now, Vanessa has the most unusual effect on men. When I write about her, my imagination has no limits and my muse runs free with total abandon. Vanessa whispered in my ear, telling me one of her unusual stories.....

 

Lunching with my friend, Elaine, a highly skilled emergency room nurse, I told her that I needed a referral for an allergist. She smiled at me, using her elusive Mona Lisa smile, almost purring when she told me  she had the perfect doctor in mind for me. Reaching into her purse, she gave me one of his cards, warning me that he had a tendency to be gruff and was certainly nothing to look at, but that he was the best in his field of medicine.

 

Making an appointment later that day, I was told  the doctor had a cancellation and that I could see him the next morning at 10:00 A.M. if I wanted to. My sinus's were killing me, so of course I said yes.

 

In his office the next morning
I was nervous about seeing
A new doctor; after hearing about him
I considered sneaking out the back door.

I was shown into his private office
Resigned to meet a cranky old man
That was most likely ugly and
Had the bedside manner of a toad!

 
When the doctor stood up, I was mesmerized!
I looked upon a golden speciman of man
That looked as if he had just walked off
The pages of Gentlemans Quarterly
 

We stood in absolute silence, our eyes
Devouring one another with covert glances
Of raw, naked,  pulse throbbing admiration.
It seemed as if there were only the two of us

Until the nurse cleared her throat, introducing us.
"Please, have a seat while I ask you a few questions
Ummm, how long have you had sinus problems?
Tell me all about your condition."

"Where would you like me to start, I inquired?"
Pitching my file to the other end of his desk,
His silken voice murmured "How about the
Day you were born and don't leave anything out."

Okay, the gloves were off; all pretense laid aside
I now needed to decide where to go from here,
How to proceed with this golden Adonis
That obviously had more on his mind,
Than treating my sinuses.

We were both single and there was
An obvious attraction that pulled us under
Like a whirling vortex in the deepest
Ocean, claiming us both as victims.

He quickly stood and walked to my seat,
Extending his masculine hand toward mine,
Pulling me up close to him as he exclaimed'
"Look, I don't know what is happening here
And, this has never happened to me before


But I'm willing to go with these powerful feelings
If you think you want to explore them with me"
I looked up into his gorgeous eyes, saying
The first thing that  popped into  my mind:
 

"Doctor, you have the most beautiful brown eyes" 
He threw his head back, roaring with laughter
"And you, my dear, have large, luminous green eyes
And the most beautiful red hair I have ever seen."
 

"Look, I can't even think straight. I'm going to
Give you an allergy medication that should
Help you, but I can't examine you right now
I'm too flustered to even think straight."

"Please,  promise me that you will
Meet me for dinner tonight or I won't
Be able to see any patients tomorrow
For tossing and turning all night long
Having wild and exotic dreams about you."


Will you meet me tonight at Trader Vic's?

Joy Hale
Copyright 2011
All rights Reserved
 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Oh, Doctor. What Beautiful Brown Eyes You have!"
Reviewed on October 17, 2012
OOOOOOO!!!! I like this!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 22, 2011
Wow Joy, I haven't met a Dr. quiet like this, he sounds like a dream come true, so now I have to keep reading.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by J Howard
Reviewed on September 7, 2011
quite a dream- come to words....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 7, 2011
So romantic, Joy. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
A wonderfully romantic write indeed Laura

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on July 28, 2011
Joy, LOVE IT! Not quite what I would expect from you, but I guess I'll just have to adjust my expectations..... Waiting for the next installment. Dick

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 26, 2011
...NEITHER CAN I, JOY....THIS IS GOOD WRITING THAT LEAVES THE READER EAGERLY AWAITING THE NEXT EPISODE IN THE LIFE OF VANESSA. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 25, 2011
Sizzling............. can't wait...

Anna

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2011
MOMMA MIA JOY,,,WAITING FOR PART ii...ANNA

Reviewed on July 24, 2011
definately continue...... ~ Morgan

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
I often wondered how doctor's were able to restrain themselves. I guess I'll have to wait for part 2 to appear.

George

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
I love this romantic stretch, Joy.
It may indeed be 'fanciful' fiction
but it's so well grounded in real possibility
and delivered with style.

John

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
WOW! With my Green eyed jealousy,
I read Your Exquiste Poem!!

~Lady Joy~

The mystery of You being so intriguing,
I must confess...wanting more and more
of this from the archives of Your mind

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
Wonderful a romantic journey you have taken us on Joy!
I am charmed by your story and looking forward to more...
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
...well, well..you have me captivated, I think I am going to make a reservation at Trader Vic's..after-all..you left us on a cliffhanger :)
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
Ah, a doctor/patient kind of a medical thing going on here. Yes, Joy, you and I know that the doctors have been getting younger and younger all the time lately. A beautiful brown eyed doctor, huh? Well, we'll just have to wait to see what kind of doctor/patient relationship goes on here.
Mark

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
Quite a captivating tale, Joy.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on July 24, 2011
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Marjorie Baker (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2011
Joy, You'll never get that book finished--you're having too much fun! How many years have we been friends? Where have you kept all the 'other Joys' hidden? GO GIRL! Love you, Marge

Reviewed by James Johnston
Reviewed on July 23, 2011
My Goodness! Joy, Sis and I just watched the Cornerstone Christmas Pageant you gave her which established our train of thoughts. Now, we read your latest adventure and our minds are in shock! By the way, personally I can't wait for next installment. Just Jim (mesmerized)!

Reviewed on July 23, 2011
Me thinks I smell romance here ... could happen ... you never know ... LOL GREAT poem!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2011
Ah. Zee doktor! The hunk and the beauty. Story continues . . .


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