I dreamed of you
before you arrived that summer
Chemistry?
instantaneous combustion
Your smile caused
my heart to smolder
There’s no comparing
your silken caress of my cheek
You made me feel like a precious jewel
Immediately,
I couldn’t imagine turning back
Promising honesty,
you made me believe in springtime
Your soul – palpable,
soothing mine
Your sincerity sparkled
like a freshly cut diamond
I believed the truth
apparent in your eyes
Expressing faith in me,
you became the keeper of my dreams
Then,
I didn’t want to turn back
Nothing
could’ve prepared me
for your dance upon my heart
Perhaps
I’ve simply dreamed of you?
I wish
I knew your truth
But now
that I’ve surrendered my heart to you
I don’t know how to turn back
Tami~ I miss this and I wished I didn't earlier.
I felt like this so deeply months ago~ Wonderful Romantic Poem, I enjoyed immensouly! Warm HuGs! Love,*She*oxo BE Happy and WELL!
I agree with all the others in their assessment of your beautiful poem. It is obvious to me that you have a huge following. This romantic poem is lovely without being hackneyed in any way. I love the words
'Nothing
could’ve prepared me
for your dance upon my heart'
Beauty and a Grace, and Oh...
Oh, how ever so full of that human longing and I, it is so full of your whole Heart and I am...well, Congratulations!
and yes, there is a hauntingly longing quality and I love your Imagery...and it, well, one relates, and...
(((Tami)))
m.
Thank you for this Poem!
(and well, more...yes, your words to me, I, well..
what a Heart!)
Reviewed by JEREMIAH JAMES (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2004
Beautiful, Tammy. Very good write.
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
I've been there for this one. It's a hell of a conundrum and one that is not easy to solve. It is certainly something that one never forgets
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
A very powerful conundrum to solve, which translates into a very powerful poem.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Brave thing to do, either pleasure or pain, but life is about taking the plunge, in a rationale way..
Nothing
could’ve prepared me
for your dance upon my heart
Perhaps
I’ve simply dreamed of you?
I wish
I knew your truth
But now
that I’ve surrendered my heart to you
I don’t know how to turn back
Tami...wonderful romantic write....this one is very very splendid....twist of the heart...love n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
tami, a real nice poem. great job.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
A beautiful work of poetic art, much enjoyed, Tami.
Tami, this has a loud ring of truth to it, for I felt myself nodding all the way through... oh, yes.. it is like that, isn't it? In matters
of the heart, I suppose it makes sense to just leave our heads at home... we're basically "goners" at first.. sigh... great stuff, here.. katy xox.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2004
beautiful writing Tami....
the ending is splendid..
floria
Love! It is eternal no matter how one expresses oneself about it. Thank you, Tami. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
amen sister. I'm living it too...thanks for your comments and support. blessings!
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
This is so romantic
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
FAN-TAS-TIC!!! I loved the way this poem kept leading you on and actually had the conclusion in doubt (at least as far as I was concerned) but the ending was supburb. Great stuff.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
So beautiful and romantic Tammy this one is outstanding...
Peg
I enjoy your writing very much. I'm becoming a fan.
I felt like this so deeply months ago~ Wonderful Romantic Poem, I enjoyed immensouly! Warm HuGs! Love,*She*oxo BE Happy and WELL!
'Nothing
could’ve prepared me
for your dance upon my heart'
I love the originality of your work!
Chanti
Love, Janet xoxoxo
...Michael
~Chrissie
Amor
Scott
to the tap dancing on your heart..
Very nicely etched and congratulations on your win!
Donna
Congratulations on your win!
A glorious piece, wonderfully composed!
Love, Sheila
Oh, how ever so full of that human longing and I, it is so full of your whole Heart and I am...well, Congratulations!
and yes, there is a hauntingly longing quality and I love your Imagery...and it, well, one relates, and...
(((Tami)))
m.
Thank you for this Poem!
(and well, more...yes, your words to me, I, well..
what a Heart!)
could’ve prepared me
for your dance upon my heart
Perhaps
I’ve simply dreamed of you?
I wish
I knew your truth
But now
that I’ve surrendered my heart to you
I don’t know how to turn back
Tami...wonderful romantic write....this one is very very splendid....twist of the heart...love n luck...BHUWAN
Nice and smooth.
Big question that only
you can answer. Good luck.
Reindeer
of the heart, I suppose it makes sense to just leave our heads at home... we're basically "goners" at first.. sigh... great stuff, here.. katy xox.
the ending is splendid..
floria
This gives the heart a good squeeze.
Best wishes,
John
Peg