Your love is like a water fall!! (poem) by Masood Lohar on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 21, 2005

Dear Masood,

Your words flow just like the waterfall, beautifully soft and alluring. The following lines are quite exquisite, and so full of meaning. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

"Ships crash on the reefs of your love
Survivors fall prey to the pirates of your eyes
The lotus on your lips enslaves the rest
Those who have passed the previous test"

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Shezray Faisal

Reviewed on July 12, 2005

This is lovely! Yes love gives one the feeling of witnessing a magnificent waterfall!
~Shezray

Reviewed by Aftab Khaskheli

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

when i read massod's this poetry, my heart is ful of motion, realy
i enjoy when i read massod's poetry or artical. i hope massod will
carry his best poetry

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on April 8, 2005

Dear Masood,
This is an exquisite poem, filled with insight and beauty. Your writing seems to flow easily from you. I will be looking forward to reading more of your poetry and being inspired.
Thank you!
Chanti

Reviewed by Gracie McKeever

Reviewed on March 10, 2005

Wow, I like this a lot. Simple, to the point, yet profound. Well-done!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

waterfalls can be both dangerous and refreshing...much like love. ~ sara

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

This flows really well, and it is a lovely poem. The last three lines are really well done, especially the one about the pirates, very original.

Reviewed by Amy Lynn Kampmier (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

I absolutely love this, very romantic and full of heart.

Reviewed by Rene' Bennett (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

I really like the theme you use here and continue to use the flow of water as the flow of love. And as flowing water, never knowing in which direction it will lead you. Excellent thought as well as imagery.

Rene'

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on January 13, 2005

A very loving sensual way of expressing your love for your lady, well done.

Smiles
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

Really romantic and a love held high for her. Really beautiful way to express your undying love.
Tracey

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Passionate and loving! Great offering, Masood. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

beautiful poem for your lady!