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A Whisper, a Name
by CHANTI LACE → (All Poetry by CHANTI LACE)
Wednesday, November 25, 2015    Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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FOR YOU MY LOVE....


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You asked of me the moment
not the date, the time or place
when I succumbed to inner feelings
and your love I did embrace
Was not the moment by a candle’s light
with eye’s staring across its glare
that instilled my want or passion
or gave the feeling that you could care
It wasn’t a night out on the town
with dancing and a topless car
with the wind caressing through my hair
hand in hand while picking our favorite star
No it wasn’t the day at the beach
with us churning within the waves
or the way that you gently dried me off
while pretending to be my slave
The day at a park of total seclusion
laughing and rolling upon the grass
did nothing to plant desires of love
yet confirmed that you had class
Not even the twilight and a stroll
with the heavens set afire
could deliver to you my everything
my heart, my soul or desire
Yet the moment finally came along
in the moonlight I’d give my all
I doubt you hardly noticed
but in you I began to fall
The breathing was fast and passion high
as you stoked the fire to build my flame
was the moment when we both converged as one
and you whispered softly out my name.

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 Reviews of "A Whisper, a Name"
Reviewed by Robert Harrison
Reviewed on November 4, 2016
You still have it dear girl. After an absence of a few years I thought it about time I started to look up some old friends.
I did enjoy this write for which I give you my thanks. It took me back some 60 years when but a young man I felt as you did in this romantic poem.

My undying respect for all of your works.

Robert Harrison

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on October 16, 2016
As beautiful and sensual as the Lady who penned it.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on February 14, 2016


well done


Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2015
Welcome back, CHANTI! This is by far, your #1 poem!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Doc Burrell
Reviewed on November 28, 2015
The thoughts of expression are a passionate delight in simple lovely way. Thanks for the inspiration and lovely words.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 26, 2015
11-26-2015

Where You Been!?

As It Is Nobody Does Writes It Better
Keep Em Comen...

TRASK...

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 26, 2015
HAVE A HAPPY THANKSGIVING, CHANTILACE, AND THANKS FOR THE POST. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 26, 2015
The passion of your words,
Is a true delight.
Welcome back Chanti,
It was a beautiful write.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 26, 2015
I can't top the other comments to your welcome return. I will just say that you have a way of expressing passion in your poems that is second to none.

Ron

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 26, 2015
The moment when we discover the love of our lives is like no other, a magical time. It is the best of the best it sets every other priority in their proper place, below the love of our lives. Can there be a more rewarding event in life, no. You have described the seminal moment with passion and attention to all of the delicate emotions. I shall forever savor mine. She is the epicenter of my life.

Reviewed on November 26, 2015
Yes. THAT was the moment!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Smith (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2015
Very beautiful! Someone is extremely lucky...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 25, 2015
Great to see you posting again with a poem that has left me breathless and consumed.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 25, 2015
Thank you for sharing this passionate and loving write, Chanti; most engaging and evocative. Your verses awaken the senses. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 25, 2015
"you whispered softly out my name."

Yes, those soft lips touching our ears and saying our names gets us each and every time, Chanti! Good to see you back.


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