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In some ways I still consider this a work in progress.

Wednesday, April 16, 2003

I Awake

by Diane C. Hundertmark

I awake with a dream's remnants flickering in my mind

Flat primitive drawings

But

What is meant by

The symbols seen as confused

and

The omens glimpsed?

Images of the past in fragments?

Aspirations lost in time?

Maybe just scrawls of my deepest longings

Portents of future events?

by Diane C. Hundertmark

Updated and edited a little bit March 2020

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Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

Actually, I must agree with Ann Berg: this poem is finished and quite to the waking point at that. Keep up the good work by moving on to new works. ~~Love in Christ, Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Ann Berg

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

I would consider this finished,
Great!

Reviewed by Peter Benson

Reviewed on April 18, 2003

Evokes that first awakening moment beautifully.

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on April 17, 2003

have to agree with Elizabeth

Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione

Reviewed on April 17, 2003

this one is a good one to say the least. You call this a work in progress -- how much longer are you going to make this one? Keep up the strong work. I got a poem up here titled "Pacione's Inferno" and a short story titled "Dreams From The Stillborn."

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2003

Looks like a finished work to me. Flows beautifully and the choice of words is supurb.

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