my forever words and forever searching that are not, for all that you are i am not, for what you have walked away from i ran to, your nightmares are my dreams, your truth is the window of your doom, and the opening of my eye's. i have cried for you, looked for you, and hoped for you, your honor was not, what genetic life organs did you pass on, i look in the mirror and see only a reflection of me, my smile has been a life force, what has come so easy for me was hard for you, my make-up is the shadow of my pages that are writing from my passions of who i am and who i have become, forever words have become my make up.
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Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
A Smile life force. So true. This is really nice. Thank you.
God Bless You and Your family.
Happiest and Warmest of days all days
Tracey
You are a thoughtful person, philosophically capable of moving your audience with your prose-like rendition of possibilities, doubts, motives and the reflective consciousness that depicts life at full bloom. Thanks for a nice read.
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God Bless You and Your family.
Happiest and Warmest of days all days
Tracey
This is truly a very moving piece.
So beautifully written, this one
really put a lump in my throat.
" for all that you are i am not, for what you have walked away from i ran to, your nightmares are my dreams,"
Thank you for sharing this.
warm hugs
Elga
I like what you have written in this piece. Thought-provoking and very insightful indeed.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Askia