He was a simple man
With sweet-simple tastes:
Frosted Flakes for breakfast
Southern Comfort when it got late.
For a couple of weeks, it was just we two
With this houseful of detritus to rummage through.
He balked at forsaking his brown wooden house
On a wide macadam street with a lonely maple out front.
"Do I have to leave?" more than one time he sighed,
Then gracefully surrendered to forgetfulness – and time.
These were good-busy days, on deadline, but timeless.
We sorted, and sifted, and put sore points behind us.
"When I abandoned your dream, were you sad? Or not?"
He smiled, shook his head, and poured one more shot.
A half century of memories, leisurely conversation,
Bookended by flakes of gold and an amber libation.
We walked familiar streets, and down by the river.
Gazed at crinkling faded photos by a cozy-crackling fire.
He retold the old stories and recalled new ones, too
Like getting drunk on Southern Comfort at the end of World War Two.
He saw some old friends, there are now but a few.
When one tried to hug him, he awkwardly withdrew.
But later, he wept, he was given no choice
When he heard a recording of my mother's sweet voice.
It was dark and cold, car packed, ropes taut.
In the foyer, we lingered, gathering our thoughts.
We offered a brief prayer of thanks and regret
And one for the new owners unknown to us yet.
Time to leave.
Was he sad?
His answer, a sigh.
I drove down the street, and came back around,
Then inched past our house as he breathed a silent goodbye.
He now is gone, but the memories aren’t dim.
Of my dad and the home that was precious to him.
It's been years since that dusk when we drove out of sight,
Past two amber porch lights glowing in the night. |
This is the best poem I have read for a very long time...one of the best I have ever read. Firmly tucked away in my library...Thank you...and thanks to your dear Dad also...
Janna
I loved the title, too.
Best wishes,
Pisces
I felt your memory as if it were my own, it is a sad thing letting go. Not of the House...but of the Home. It's very hard to do & for some impossible, and then for some crippling.
Ok I think I need a tissue this morning.....Memories Are Powerful & Contagious!!!
Embrasse'
Vickie
Janet
Sandy
Blessings and love to your wonderful heart.
Susan
Regis
You have a way of gripping your reader's heart with simple honesty and sentiment.
Gina
Blessings,
Joyce B.
You have talent John.
I don't dare call myself a poet..LOL!
I only write thoughts that churn within my heart and soul!
I can relate to this gem of a write.
An avalanche of memories struck me as I read your words.
Thankyou John!
Vesna:)
strong colorful memories
enjoyed!
I think death, dying, leaving could have been better planned by the Creator. It's too wrenching the way it is.
Love this...you were a good son.
Elizabeth
I love looking back!
I loved this write! And so nice to meet you, John
Love and Peace~
Kimmy
Rusty