Liberties taken, tempers flare
Need to cut loose on my cares
Need a safe place to vent the pain
Trusting your love I abuse your care.
All the passions of my past
Demand expression, won’t depart
All those things left unresolved
All my issues just won’t dissolve.
Feel like a funnel unable to flow
Pressure building, want to blow!
But I’m blocked - don't know how to go
No one taught me about the flow.
Frustration builds and so it goes
Many mistakes - attempts to grow
Like a prisoner with a million keys
Wish I knew the one that frees.
Maybe I am being a pest
Want security without the fee
But, they won’t do what birds know best
Too afraid I'll fail the test.
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Ref.(a)Tao Te Ching
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There are plenty of eggs in this "Nest Pest"... They hold many secrets in their exoteric appearance... The fourth stanza impresses me:
"Frustration builds and so it goes
Many mistakes - attempts to grow
Like a prisoner with a million keys
Wish I knew the one that frees." < < < Very esoteric and exoteric; ontologic and teleologic concepts flowing, and the closing strophe makes one learn:
"Maybe I am being a pest
Want security without the fee
But, they won’t do what birds know best
Too afraid I'll fail the test."
Magnificent, bountiful stream of wisdom in the forest of mankind.
I salute You, Poet.
In reverent admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Be safe,
Karen