These Sonnets are the collabrative efforts of The Poetic Gentleman,Felix Perry (two thumbs up for editing as well.)Feeness, you complete me perfectly. Thank you. And Lady Jennave
Jennave Belleu Coz.
The lady wrote in coached terms
Shadowed images in word
Bared her soul and opened her heart
Wondering if anyone even heard
Was she absurd…she thought not.
For the Poetic Gentleman heard
Listened with his heart she thought
Did he wrestle too… the desire she fought
Miles and whispers came between them
Hearts not free can’t roam at will
Swallowed by the world’s own deceit
Desire can be but a bitter pill
Alas he wished to hear her precious voice
Twas then she read his words aloud
She brought her candied dreams about
Whereas others may not be as proud
“Oh my Lady Jennave, take my hand
and hold it to your loving breast…
No other song will be as beautiful as ours
or so satisfy my sweet request.”
To reach forth but with trembling hand
She knew her heart was the Gentleman’s
Though he was not in her plan
She’d fallen in love now Heart be damned
Verbal brush strokes once mote come alive
To paint a passionate canvas of sensual hues
The Lady’s fingers entwine with the Gentleman’s
Stroke now shades of flesh tone offered clues
So should our trembling both combine
As lips on fingertips do so subtly dine
Once just once Lady and Gentleman combine
Just this once in our lifetime
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Reviews of "The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave"
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2007
Excellent! "Just this once in our lifetime"
I have enjoyed this for the third time.
My best regards,
Chris
A stunning collaboration, Jennave and Fee: excellence in verse. Well done! Yes. You two need to do this more often! Each of you stand alone, but together: magic!
Just wanted to thank Jen for such a lovely sharing of ideas and heart pulls as this offering captured the romantic nature of two hopeless romantics. Enjoyed working with you on this one Jen.
hugs
Fee
A dance of pens spin a duet in time with the rhymes of Romance. Chance and space erase the miles between two souls who feel the lash of hearts beating for Loves casement. Enjoyed
I have enjoyed this for the third time.
My best regards,
Chris
Bravo, very wonderfully collaborated!
Peace, Love, and Light,
AMber "V"
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
dan
Aberjhani
hugs
Fee
pretty.......
Walt