he was my terracotta love, etched like soul hunger basking, formed a veil on my face lonely love seducing rotunds of flesh my poetry wisped down fingers of tears and I remember pictures wearing gold recurrent Beethoven charms, alluring me naked through pink skies, and fluffy hair. The music was too loud
There he stood all stretched orchard stare, lusty hair, smooch ready, bona fide lover........
Sensational!-- in every sense of the word. I love the "measured cups" and the washing machine "hurricanes" -- so vivid, tactile, and ... sensational --Charlie
Saberi...every word...within every line...gives me color of ones remembrance...of passion...which perhaps I might have seen...peeking through sheer curtains.
expressive and beautifully written...your pen is.
John
This leaves a tinge of mystique within the lines of fond remebrance or perhaps the letting go of such a dream? The lines echo these sentiments with such romance that it leaves pause for yearning with these images echoing beyond the whispers of the heart. Beautiful writing, Saberi
Amor
One needs a cold shower after this write. Snacks are only preliminary to the full course meal. (lol) Excuse the pun but your poem is very tastefully done. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
A melange of luscious and delectable words are at play here . . . The unorthodox is commonplace and the feel of passion is real . . . Pleasant memories . . . Sensing lust in the gypsy smoke . . .
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage as she is…whether they wa
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
expressive and beautifully written...your pen is.
John
Amor
truly nice work...
Lovely!
R~
ET
One needs a cold shower after this write. Snacks are only preliminary to the full course meal. (lol) Excuse the pun but your poem is very tastefully done. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.