as you sleep (poem) by Sheila Roy on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 15, 2013

The elements of your poetry capture the oldest of transcending and for that I have a glimpse of life passing, between sunsets and dawns. Great work!

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on April 21, 2012

The comfort of love and peace at sleep. Wonderful write. while one sleeps is a special time to feel and whisper of love.

Eddy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on October 30, 2011

Awesome. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on October 22, 2011

was that you???? ;-) lovely poem you wrote here-very romantic

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 17, 2011

Passion is a conscious mate and adventurer Sheila. You reveal the mysteries it assays with prominence. Satisfaction is a master we bow to when our heart is on fire for that special person in our lives. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

I like this poem and layout, Sheila

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on June 16, 2011

Warm and voluptuous words, Sheila. This is penetrating, even through the shape you chose for your poem.

Axilea

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on June 7, 2011

Oh this is lovely, Sheila. So soft, sensual, and ever so dreamy. Very well done.
Hugs,
CJ

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on June 7, 2011

Beautiful, romantic, soft, sensuous and emotive. I loved this gentle touch and felt the moment. Well done my friend. Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 6, 2011

romantic......we are guided by your short lines to a beautiful finale, it is gentle and soft

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 5, 2011

Wow...I become mesmerized by the satin of these words.
Amor

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

This is a sweetly touching romantic poem. You always offer the best.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 1, 2011

Your poetry is a treasure to read
Most enjoyable write
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

there is a calm to this and a heat...perhaps the tension of ...wanting a little more....great write. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

This is as beautifully romantic and sensuous as it gets!!!! Stunning poetry, Sheila.....

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

FANTASTIC IMAGERY AND PHRASES IN THIS WORK. ENJOYED AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

Oh my..very lovely writing sweet lady...Hugsss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

Lovely, Indeed.

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

Smokes, this nearly blew my hard...............drive!
Such beauty, indeed very sensuous and subtly tantalising.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

Oh sigh, it does not get more deeply beautiful than this...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

I thought I was tracking you. I am now.

This is exotic to the nth, Sheila. Each line was bolder than the last and, like your breath, it continued raising expectations. Great sensuous read.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

You excel in reaching a climax with soft tender words

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

All I can "say" is whomever this is for is one lucky individual. Wow! Sheila, this is beautiful and soft and I thank you for sharing it. Love and hugs and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

Another gem of a write, Sheila,
calm, intimate, sensuous and erotic
with the overriding feelings
of love and contentment.
Just gorgeous!

John

Reviewed by Joy Hale

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

A beautiful cascade of words overflowing with tender thoughts,a love poem with depth and intense feelings. In other words... Fantastic! Loved it! Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

Very beautiful expression of passion for the one you love. Well done Shiela, great capture of the night.
fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

Goodness me oh my ... "As You Sleep" is the work of someone re-focused and energized. Affirmation and acceptance exudes from between the lines of this lovely waterfall of words Sheilafriend. Deftly you bless the reader with honeyed grace and deeper shades of your multi-faceted creative endowments. That's kinda like poetic cleavage. Haha (-:
Yur friend ... richard

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 30, 2011

Such a wonderfully soft way of expressing desire!
The style you have chosen in this poem really helps grow the breathlessness and energy. Love it!
Christine