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FOREVER IN EXILE
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Looking back and moving forward


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FOREVER IN EXILE

 

I wanted so much to be your Queen

  for you to take my hand

And lead me to our special place

  a neon lit neverland

But your idea of love

  was 18th century

Where you could rescue me

 

Whilst i was trying my best

  to become someone

Independently

  I didnt want our love

to be ordinary

  You're not normal

You said cruelly

  You must have ADHD

Because of my energy

 

And even if I had

  If you had loved me

More than physically

  you would be glad

to have my company

  instead you said i had

to get fixed

  but i wasn't broken

 

And since then

  we haven't spoken

 

I don't know about the

  blueprint

In your brain

  I do know i am a Queen

without a reign

  Forever in exile

while you point the finger

  of blame

 

It's a shame

 

we could have been

  so good together

I guess it's now

  or never

I must move on

  to a another kingdom

where princes line up

  to take my hand

building castles in the sand

 

But my love for you

  was unplanned

And for that i must stay

  forever in exile

 

cos that's your way

 

(c) AJ Williams 24th May 2007

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 Reviews of "FOREVER IN EXILE"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on May 27, 2007
and you'll have peace
cause dreams are lined in the sands you know
enjoyed!!!

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on May 25, 2007
A very modern poem of a very modern love. "A neon lit neverland" is a wonderful and original metaphor.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
Beautiful photograph of the shoreline! You have penned a most delicately, lovely, passionate piece, enjoyed it very much.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
Well said, I like historical element.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
A.J.,

There's more to love than just passion and grasping all that you can get from it is your fulfillment. The world is filled with 18th century people. You've come a long way baby and staying one step ahead of the pace is livng your dream. Bless You Always, Paul.


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