Cascading into entropy, trapped in a distillation of my dreams, I fall forever as the world holds still.
Your eyes strip me to an essencial core Love is gravity and momentum finding balance. Solar winds and star-tides, curl within my belly. I exist betweet heartbeats in a place only you can reach.
Are we suspended or suspending? The universe must wait as we decide.
What a riveting poem! It does kind of keep the reader in a state of limbo, wondering what is next. Thanks for your suggestions on my children's story.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2004
Lee,
This is a visual one indeed.
"Your eyes strip me
to an essencial core
Love is gravity and momentum
finding balance.
Solar winds and star-tides,
curl within my belly.
I exist betweet heartbeats
in a place only you can reach.'
And one that is waiting,
so good to see you back...
lady peg
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2004
Lee, were it I, I would make sure the decision was in her favor. The need for action seems obvious? Bill Murray
Shirine McVey discovers that twenty years of her life have elapsed since she went to sleep in a hotel room in El Paso, Texas. And worse, she is married to a man she doesn't know.
I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
This is a sentimental and epic story about a young man, injured in the Viewnam War, who returns to Dallas, Texas, in 1964, and begins rebuilding his life. Set against the rock and roll era of the early 1960’s, when casual sex and recreational drugs w
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This is a visual one indeed.
"Your eyes strip me
to an essencial core
Love is gravity and momentum
finding balance.
Solar winds and star-tides,
curl within my belly.
I exist betweet heartbeats
in a place only you can reach.'
And one that is waiting,
so good to see you back...
lady peg