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He Does Me Wrong Song
by Rosemarie Skaine → (All Poetry by Rosemarie Skaine)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
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To Those Still in Search

Loving you makes me swallow my pride
So much so that I run and hide.
They say love is like the ebb and flow
But I am always at a low.
While you create your illusion
I live in the shadow of your delusion.
Every moment, at every turn, you erase
Until my certificate of birth is without a trace.
My prison within this extension
Leaves me without evolution.
You may believe you hold me dear,
But goodbye, my love, never fear.

 

 


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 Reviews of "He Does Me Wrong Song"
Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
Reviewed on October 25, 2012
Love can be freeing or a deep well that is a trap. This is so telling of the kind that is not freeing!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 30, 2011
There are many "levels" or "intensities" of love... ...and often, love does hurt. Thank you, Rosemarie. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
Wow I would love to hear Norah Jones sing this very good diddty.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 11, 2011
Take your key
Unlock the door
Your prision then
Will be no more

Tell the warden
You've had enough
As you lock him in
And call his bluff

Patrick

Reviewed by Mike Bayles
Reviewed on October 8, 2011
This is a little different from your other poems. This is a good, sad love poem. The words in this poem are powerful. Love isn't always happy.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on October 8, 2011
OUCH! Very well written, there is a hurting in these words, to be sure, but nay, not for long, not for a heart that is true.

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on October 8, 2011
A deeply moving poem well done Laura

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 7, 2011
Love is indeed often blind and causes us to forget pride and our own well being. Your poem reflects that it is fine if the feeling is recipricol but if not...yes it is time for you to part and take up the search again.
fee


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