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You Promised
by Sara Carlson → (All Poetry by Sara Carlson)
  
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You promised me the moon,
The sun, sky, and stars.
You promised me you'd find me,
No matter where you were or how far.

You promised me you'd be there,
To catch my every falling tear.
You promised me that when I succeeded,
You would be there to cheer.

You promised me you'd love me,
Until the end of time.
You promised me you'd cherish me,
And that you would always be mine.

You promised me my dreams,
That you'd help make them come true .
You even promised to buy me that car,
The Beemer convertible, in blue.

You promised me you'd keep me safe,
From all the downfalls of life.
You promised you would help me,
Take the brunt of all my strifes.

You promised you'd never leave me,
But that promise was broken fast.
I guess that's just one of the many,
Empty promises you've made me in the past.

*Written for a friend*

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 Reviews of "You Promised"
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
Ah... those promises, promises. Nice work

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on August 22, 2002
nice poem. well written. well said.

Reviewed by Penny Hayes (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2002
Very nice flow in words, only thing is after a , the next part of the sentence doesn't need to be capitalized.

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2002
Excellent poem alot of emotions expressed..


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