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The Blue Of Your Eyes
by Sara Carlson → (All Poetry by Sara Carlson)
  
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I think it's a great poem, as it also is not one of my own but of one of my best friends, Nora Fazioli, so please put your reviews to her :)

The Blue of Your Eyes

The blue of your eyes is captivating

When I stare into them, I melt

Two oceans that lead into my heart

Two skies that cloud my soul

If I reach into them

I’ll never come back

I’ll be trapped forever

In the blue of your eyes

You have a hold on me

That cannot be broken

A hold so deep and blue

For the hug of your face is pure

And the kiss of your eyes is true

The Blue of Your Eyes

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 Reviews of "The Blue Of Your Eyes"
Reviewed by Mary Anne McGuiness (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
its great....i like it a lot...me personally, i am not aware enough to notice poeples eyes color...jk...its a great poem

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
Beautiful.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
very romantic write, great job! ~Z~

Reviewed by Dre
Reviewed on July 27, 2003
I think this is great! Very well written.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on July 27, 2003
Nora...

The Blue of Your Eyes

The blue of your eyes is captivating

When I stare into them, I melt

Two oceans that lead into my heart

Two skies that cloud my soul

If I reach into them

I’ll never come back

I’ll be trapped forever

In the blue of your eyes

You have a hold on me

That cannot be broken

A hold so deep and blue

For the hug of your face is pure

And the kiss of your eyes is true

The Blue of Your Eyes

Prisoner of the soul.. Prisoner of blue.. Just beautiful!!!!

Reviewed by Courtnie
Reviewed on July 27, 2003
hey i think this is awesome i love the analogies and everything its simple yet deep

Keep Writing
*~*Courtnie*~*


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