recess time (Poetry) - 10/10/2009 8:15:29 PM
Steavan,
Very well written with fantastic metaphors. We are indeed, at recess.
Mary
aloof (Poetry) - 9/30/2009 7:05:07 AM
Very interesting write, requires rereading a few more times.
Cheers,
Dan
only becoming one (Poetry) - 4/8/2009 3:17:47 AM
Great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
Souled (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 1:51:03 AM
Intriguing and excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
Souled (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 2:21:05 PM
Fascinating, descriptive write overshadowed by a darkness, very powerful....
Be always safe,
Karen
Souled (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 10:11:46 AM
ou have given us much of life's view and the way it is of our living out each day. Feelings such as these come to us all each day and we must work them through somehow.
Souled (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:59:15 AM
A powerfully dark write, unveiling the soul. The rhyme is well done and the mood, heart affecting.
Souled (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:58:17 AM
Oh my...interesting indeed..stay safe and well...Hugss
Conspiracy (Poetry) - 3/4/2009 2:42:50 PM
Such a priceless beauty....
Be always safe,
Karen
Unwelcome Freedom (Poetry) - 3/1/2009 7:49:25 AM
Hello Steaven,
This is welcome. It does not need to be rigid in form, the beauty is is in the freedom to write and express a message or feeling, because writing is an art. Write on!
Cynthia
Unwelcome Freedom (Poetry) - 3/1/2009 4:16:57 AM
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Unwelcome Freedom (Poetry) - 3/1/2009 2:41:07 AM
Great poem,take care
Edwin
