Ocean Court (Book) - 4/3/2003 6:02:23 AM
Read the opening Chap 1 excerpt on another of your pages. A little confusing as to who is doing what to whom in the first couple of paragraphs, as are they inside or outside of the bar? A X-dresser is playing pool, but it sounds like they're outside. You still write better than 99% of the people on here : )
