A Hard Parting (Poetry) - 8/14/2018 1:56:46 AM
Perfect, hauntingly beautiful, poignant, and intensely consuming poem on fading love and goodbyes. Love it. Best regards, Cyn.
Bereaved (Poetry) - 8/14/2018 1:50:46 AM
David, a master of the gothic poetry, you always amaze me and this poem gripped my imagination from start to finish. The title is perfect too.
Bereaved (Poetry) - 9/11/2016 11:01:34 AM
It's been a long time since I read Edgar Allen Poe. But as I read your beautifully rhyming and yet somber and dark passages, I couldn't help but think of him in the way he wrote. So, I hope you don't mind my comparing this poem to one of the great macabre poets of all time.
Ron
Bereaved (Poetry) - 9/11/2016 12:25:18 AM
Death of a loved one even a friend too, is so hard to take. At first i'd visit the cemetery every day, then it wanned off, now i hardly ever can bring myself to go see my loved ones anymore. Grieving still though, it's so hard.
Bereaved (Poetry) - 9/10/2016 1:22:44 PM
I loved this wonderful poem of love gone beneath the ground, but the one who loved her cannot seem to let it go. I very much like the instructions near the end, telling him to leave, there was nothing left there for him but to mourn and be distressed . . . Good work.
